User talk:Titsbrand/titsbrand

I would like any editors to please help with this article as this is the first one i have done.

OK
For a start - pretend you are nothing to do with the company, and then read the article. Then, scrap most if not all of your references. Anything editable like myspace, youtube (and Wikipedia) is no good as a reference. You need reliable non-editable third party refs. Anything where you can put material in yourself is useless - fairly obvious, but often overlooked. Finally, your username screams out 'I am an employee or owner of this company' - or otherwise related to it.... Peridon (talk) 22:19, 21 December 2009 (UTC)