User talk:Tjlegallais/sandbox

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Hey Thomas, just read your outline here and it sure looks like you're on the right track! Your organizational skills are on point, your page already looks like a legit Wikipedia page! I would recommend using a variety of sources ranging from books, articles, journals and other primary sources to ensure you have the most accurate and non-bias information. I also think maybe adding information on what type of behaviours are associated with each factor could be an interesting sub-section. Overall I think you're off to a great start and I look forward to reading the finished product!

Cheers,

Seongwoo