User talk:Tjnoss

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Hi! I would like to inform you that the Articles for Creation submission which was previously located here: User:Tjnoss/End time overcomers has been moved to Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/End time overcomers, this move was made automatically and doesn't affect your article, if you have any questions please ask on my talk page! Have a nice day. ArticlesForCreationBot (talk) 19:50, 9 February 2012 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia!  Nolelover   Talk · Contribs  01:25, 14 February 2012 (UTC)

End time overcomers
Alright...well, first let me just point out the sourcing. Wikipedia requires all articles to be backed up with multiple reliable, independent sources. Now, this article also has a lot of original research and soapboxing/promotional material - in other words the purpose of it seems to be to want people to become ETO's. Quite frankly, I don't believe that this topic is suitable for Wikipedia at all, but if you want to continue you'll need to take out...well....almost everything. Put it this way: if you have composed something (a list or characteristics or descriptors) it needs to go. We report what other people (and not just anyone, but reliable sources) have said about a topic and write from that. I just don't see that here.  Nolelover   Talk · Contribs  14:56, 14 February 2012 (UTC)

Nolelover,

Thanks for your patience. I understand and respect the need to keep Wikipedia a neutral and credible information source.

As a result, I've edited my proposed End Time Overcomers article, slashing anything that was original, unsubstantiated, or opinionated. The only things that now remain are direct quotes, either from the Bible itself, or from multiple, respected commentators. Hopefully my brief article will now meet Wikipedia's standards.

Thanks for your service,

Tom (talk) 14:55, 15 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Is there any way you could try to work your material into an existing article, like Christian eschatology or some such? I'm trying to help you out, because I just don't see any way that this one will be accepted as a separate article. The Bible, and hence that list of verses, is primary source, and I honestly don't know how well Biblical commentaries are received as far as reliable sourcing goes. If you want, you can try to get another opinion {here would be one place), but I can almost guarantee it would be declined as is, and I don't see any easy way of fixing it.  Nolelover   Talk · Contribs  15:14, 15 February 2012 (UTC)

OK, I'll take your advice. Thanks.

Tom (talk) 16:18, 15 February 2012 (UTC)