User talk:Tjreevey/DeVon Bean/Gabbissmart720 Peer Review

What you have so far
So far, I like that there is slight information about DeVon Bean and what he does. I edited the "o" in Olympics to be capital. I think there should be early life about him such as:

How did he get good enough for the Olympics?

Why did he want to be a sprinter?

Overall just more about his personal life and why he is the person he was/is. Gabbissmart720 (talk) 12:45, 17 April 2023 (UTC)