User talk:Tlewis10020/Evaluate an Article

Review by Tlewis10020

This article was well written and in an unbiased tone

A few suggestion I have include:

-finding the sources for information stated in the page in order to increase credibility of the article

-Adding a "Side Effect" section to list possible negative and/or positive side effects of Zein on human consumption and mass production

-Adding more into the "History" section to discuss how Zein was originally found, synthesized and regulated

-Adding more sections into the article to separate the "commercial uses" section to allow the reader to see a more detailed explanation of how Zein is being used commercially and future research

-"A military contractor is researching the use of zein to protect MRE food packages.": Going into more depth about who this person is and more specifics.

Tlewis10020 (talk) 04:26, 5 February 2021 (UTC)