User talk:Tlhouseton/sandbox

Tessa, your research is FANTASTIC--she is NOTABLE, and you will convince Wikipedia of that, if you can just get this polished. Have your group editor read the piece aloud while you make changes: fix the punctuation and grammar, and don't call her "Thirza" or use "non-neutral" language. I see you really want to hang on to that interview section. I still think it's going to be a flag for Wikipedia. How about this as a compromise: move the Filmography BELOW the interview excerpts, and then remove the sub-heading "interviews." Just blend these sections under "career." How's that sound? I am really, really impressed with how seriously you took this project and how hard you worked on it. It has come a long way!Ssenier (talk) 01:11, 2 May 2019 (UTC)

This is my talk page (Tlhouseton (talk) 18:23, 26 March 2019 (UTC))