User talk:Tlqk56/John R Tunis

Some issues I have with this so far: Is it over-referenced? While I'm writing I ref everything so I won't waste time later. I may have overdone it. The theme section feels weak, I think because I'm afraid to write anything myself for fear of being accused of original research. Is the organization done the best way poss? Did I put in too much praise of some of the books? I tried to give the reader a real feel for the rxn to them, but it may be overkill. Tlqk56 (talk) 16:25, 22 June 2012 (UTC)