User talk:Tls2018/sandbox

Hi Thiele! Nice job on your draft. If I remember correctly, you are going to insert these passages in the "signs and symptoms" and "management" sections of the ODD article, respectively. I did a little editing for you. I think the "signs and symptoms" section is ready to go. You can probably replace the current section of the ODD page with your new text. When you do, you'll be given an opportunity to briefly describe the change you made (i.e., right before you click save). Be sure to do that so that other editors will know what changes you have made and why.

The other subsection, on "management" is almost ready. I did a little editing to it. I would like you to proofread what I wrote. Then, try to add a little more to your description of the Incredible Years program. I am not sure readers will understand what it is based on your description. Finally, I would suggest adding at least one citation for each of the three treatments you described. It should not be too hard to find a citation for each one on google scholar. If you need help, ask a reference librarian. Overall, nice work! It is a large improvement over the current ODD entry.--Skinner&#39;s Pigeon (talk) 15:09, 27 March 2015 (UTC)