User talk:Tmaraki/The Enchantments

Responding to Review
Hi Mako- Thanks for your suggestions! I took all of your advice and edited my article a bit more. I significantly summarized the lede to make it seem less overbearing, added red links where I thought they were needed, and honed in on specifically how certain pieces of information relate to The Enchantments and not just the region. I wanted to get your review one more time before I turned it live. Thanks! &#91;&#91;User:Toshie Araki &#124;Tmaraki&#93;&#93; (talk) 01:41, 6 November 2020 (UTC)


 * I made a number of small edits. This looks great and I think it's definitely good to go. — m a k o ๛  19:15, 6 November 2020 (UTC)