User talk:Tmc9/Sand drawing/KaelBanks Peer Review

User talk:Tuo68169/Vandalism/KaelBanks Peer Review

Hi, Your article is great so far, your information on Sand drawing is very interesting and keeps the audience captivated by the information. One thing I would suggest is connecting some of your sentences together or adding commas etc as some do feel short. But, overall the information is good, I would add a little more information on the technologies section of your article as I feel their is more to discuss about that subject when it comes to Sand drawing. Besides that, keep up the good work, and good luck with the article.