User talk:Tmmulkey/sandbox

Peer review: Definitely a great start overall. Everything seems relevant to the topic at hand. The article seems neutral; however, I would be careful about adding information about products (make sure sources are not biased). Not every statement is supported by a source so more references should be added. Additionally, two of the references do not have links and/or are outdated. I love the idea of adding the significance for the different types of ribbons as well. Mrp0007 (talk) 01:03, 16 September 2018 (UTC)mrp0007

Jackie's Peer Review
You have a lot of great facts and background details about awareness ribbons. Talking about the reasons people potentially use awareness ribbons was helpful. Make sure you aren't too opinionated about the topic when writing the significance section. You don't want to assume how the ribbons make people feel or what they mean to people. Jackiemhiggins (talk) 05:03, 23 September 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jackiemhiggins (talk • contribs) 04:57, 23 September 2018 (UTC)