User talk:Tmurf25

Your submission at AfC Blackstone Building (Los Angeles) was accepted
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Changes I made
Hello, your earlier draft had a few issues:
 * Written about the apartments, while the structure is really more famous for its earlier history
 * Written like an advertisement for the current business
 * Too closely copied wording from other websites, potential WP:COPYVIO issues
 * Left out some very important details, like construction date, serial number as a historic building, etc.
 * Some basic format issues like footnoting, coding in the photo to display, etc.
 * Some administrative stuff, like filing under the right title, adding links to it from other articles (or disambiguating it from Blackstone Building and Blackstone Apartments, both of which now have links to direct seekers to the right article).

I cleaned those up for you and published. Just things to bear in mind for your next article as you build your wiki skills! MatthewVanitas (talk) 21:01, 7 January 2014 (UTC)