User talk:Tng1007

Your submission at Articles for creation: Matthew P. Mayo (March 1)
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MadeYourReadThis (talk) 14:11, 1 March 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Matthew P. Mayo has been accepted
 Matthew P. Mayo, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! SkyGazer 512 What will you say? / What did I do? 17:30, 10 May 2018 (UTC)
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Please help me with... Hi! I have made major edits and updates to this page Matthew P. Mayo to reflect a neutral point of view. Would it be possible to have help with removing the template message that appears at the top? Or please let me know what else I can do to facilitate this request? Many thanks in advance for any help! Tng1007 (talk) 01:42, 4 February 2022 (UTC) Tng1007 (talk) 01:42, 4 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Probably you need to clarify whether you are or are not connected with Mayo. Since the biographical content of the article seems to be entirely without sources, there are more important things to worry about than that tag.
 * One small suggestion: figure out a way to write lists without using 'as well as'.  — jmcgnh (talk) (contribs) 06:53, 4 February 2022 (UTC)