User talk:Toa Nidhiki05 (Work)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Azeem Azhar (entrepreneur) (July 6)
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Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 15:35, 6 July 2024 (UTC)


 * Hey - I'm an experienced editor, so I'll just ask you directly here - can you provide more detail on why the article was rejected? I made substantial changes from a previous version I wasn't involved with, which I believe added a slew of strongly reliable sources that discuss Azhar or his work in great detail. Could you provide a bit more guidance on what exactly is missing? Toa Nidhiki05 (Work) (talk) 15:44, 6 July 2024 (UTC)
 * I am opting in for a second review. I see a flawed article about his company and book that lacks independence. Cheers! Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 16:28, 6 July 2024 (UTC)
 * I appreciate it! Please let me know some specifics. I really do think he's notable, which is why I chose to work on this, so if there are any areas that need improvement I'd be more than happy to do more research and find more sources to make it happen. A challenge is indeed that much of the sources also refer to his book or company, but I think on the whole the person himself is notable. Toa Nidhiki05 (Work) (talk) 16:42, 6 July 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Azeem Azhar (entrepreneur) has been accepted
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Thanks again, and happy editing! Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 09:45, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Craig Angelos (July 12)
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Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 20:17, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Hey, just checking about this one. I'd strongly encourage taking another look, especially at the sources - here's the three best ones:


 * Palm Beach Post - An entire article about Angelos's tenure at FAU, and his firing. This source is both independent of FAU, and covers the article subject and his career in detail.
 * Palm Beach Post 2 - An additional article about his firing and tenure at FAU.
 * Honolulu Star Advertiser - Article about Angelos's hiring at Honolulu, independent of the subject.
 * These are three major newspapers covering Angelos in great detail. I think this is sufficient to establish notability - specifically, three independent reliable sources providing significant, non-trivial coverage. There are several other news articles in the article as well covering Angelos in detail, and if more are needed I'd be happy to look for them. Toa Nidhiki05 (Work) (talk) 20:29, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Hello @Toa Nidhiki05 (Work), I was having double mind on whether to accept or decline this draft, but chose the latter since I will discuss it a bit with you. I am coming back to understand the role (one of the good things of doing this is to avoid AFD by speedy tagging users). Cheers! Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 20:46, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Sounds good - I understand the reluctance, especially when dealing with a disclosed editor, and appreciate your willingness to discuss! Toa Nidhiki05 (Work) (talk) 20:49, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Hey - just checking in to see if you still plan on giving this one another look. I'm happy to assist in whatever is needed. Toa Nidhiki05 (Work) (talk) 14:18, 18 July 2024 (UTC)