User talk:Toal98/sandbox

Hi, Well done you have improved the page since I looked with more references and information. It is complex, and the chronology and 'protagonists' not always clear so I have added some questions for you in capital letters which need to be addressed. I have made some minor changes and started adding some links to other wikipedia pages with info on some of the people and events which would make this stronger. I am also not sure about where these paragraphs will go - on which page? --Calfux22 (talk) 15:25, 24 December 2020 (UTC)