User talk:Toastedbagel/sandbox

Peer Review
Good job with this article! I think it's a really interesting topic and definitely an area that falls into women and the arts! A lot of really good things in here, like reference to her gallery works and exhibitions. Some things I think would help this article be more visible would be to try to include more Wikilinks to some of those galleries or exhibitions, or maybe to her education or past teachers/mentors. If those articles don't exist, go ahead and red link them, maybe someone else can come back through and continue the awesome work that you have started! The lead could maybe also be a little bit clearer to immediately demonstrate what exactly she is famous for, and why she is notable, as if the rest of the article didn't exist. Also, I know it's so hard to find non-primary sources but maybe that would also be a way to strengthen the article, by finding some more secondary sources through inter-library loan or another medium. That, along with the blue links, would make this already great article just a little bit stronger! Otherwise, great job! Super interesting topic! -- Blanketburrito (talk) 19:54, 27 April 2018 (UTC)