User talk:ToastyMcBiggins

sport and society post by erin

Thoughts on your sandbox article
Hi there! Here are a few suggestions on your article:
 * Both you and chickey13 are working on the same article. You will want to look at each other's work and see how you can integrate what you've both done into the same article.  Might be good to start collaborating soon so that you present a united front when it comes time to edit the live article.
 * You have a good start, but why not add some more? I'd say start working with chickey13 to decide who will work on which sections and make sure you're not contradicting each other.  You might also decide together what is missing and who will begin drafting it.

That's it for now…let me know how the collaboration goes! Sleuthwood (talk) 17:35, 16 March 2012 (UTC)