User talk:Tobias Brendel

why did you remove my note?Tobias Brendel (talk) 18:35, 31 December 2020 (UTC)

Chapter_13:_The_Jedi
I notice your recent edits, and your efforts to highlight details and connections in this episode to Star Wars Rebels. It can be difficult to present these kinds of background details in the right way and with good enough sources so that no one mistakes them for trivia. (It is generally preferable to avoid footnotes, but the word count requirements of a Plot section or the space requirements of the Infobox sometimes makes it necessary to use footnotes). We need to find high quality sources (hopefully better than Screenrant). Rather than thinking about the character Ahsoka, we need to think about Dave Filoni repeating the the same motifs such as the Loth-cat and the Morai owl from Star Wars Rebels. We should be able to mention that in terms of the creative decisions in the writing and directing parts of the production. Alternatively (if we were lucky enough to find a suitable source) we might mention them in terms how the VFX artists had to figure out how to translate CGI animated characters into more realistic looking effects for the Mandalorian. Keep thinking "encyclopedia encyclopedia encyclopedia". Disney Gallery The Mandalorian Season 2 will be one of the most important sources for production details, but web pages make for better references and are easier to WP:VERIFY. If you can find a good sources, such as a recent interviews from Dave Filoni should also provide you with the kind of references you need to get deep into the making of this episode.

Since you have been reverted a couple of times already it would be a good idea to discuss on the article talk page and show the sources you intend to use before adding similar information again. If the article doesn't get deleted and gradually gets improved I'm sure these details will eventually be added in some form or another. (There are other articles in the series that I'm more interested in editing, but I'll probably come back around to Chapter 13 eventually.) Good luck. -- 109.76.214.105 (talk) 20:01, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * The episode recap from Vanity Fair (a source already used a reference in the article), does mention the lothcat and the morai, but that is barely enough to WP:VERIFY. Also it is a recap not a review, if it was a review we might for example have been able to mention in the Reception/Critical response section that a reviewer praised Filoni for including details from Rebels. Like I said there's usually a way to include these kinds of details, the difficult part is presenting it so it does not look like trivia. -- 109.76.214.105 (talk) 20:19, 1 January 2021 (UTC)
 * I'd almost forgotten that the Lothcat already appeared in Chapter 4: Sanctuary https://www.cbr.com/the-mandalorian-loth-cat-star-wars-rebels/ -- 109.76.214.105 (talk) 21:03, 1 January 2021 (UTC)