User talk:Toby Ornott/Archive 1

Dwight Lauderdale
Toby, I saw your comment on Dwight Lauderdale Talk. Thanks! I'll clean that up. I did ask for peer reivew and I have an RFC already on this. Thanks KoshVorlon (talk)19:29, 21 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Update on "Dwight Lauderdale"


 * Toby, okay,  I made the changes you mentioned. I DID change "started out" to "began a career as", however I did not change "wound up" to "evolved to", that sounded a bit archaic, I DID however change it to a more neutral (and less slang) "and became".  Take a look and see what you think.


 * Thanks for your feedback KoshVorlon (talk) 19:15, 25 November 2008 (UTC)