User talk:Tomasaddam

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Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Mutalo Group


A tag has been placed on Draft:Mutalo Group, requesting that it be deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under two or more of the criteria for speedy deletion, by which pages can be deleted at any time, without discussion. If the page meets any of these strictly-defined criteria, then it may be soon be deleted by an administrator. The reasons it has been tagged are:
 * It seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. (See section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion.) Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Business for more information.
 * It appears to be a clear copyright infringement. (See section G12 of the criteria for speedy deletion.) For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or printed material, and as a consequence, your addition will most likely be deleted. You may use external websites as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences. This part is crucial: say it in your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. If the external website belongs to you, and you want to allow Wikipedia to use the text — which means allowing other people to modify it — then you must verify that externally by one of the processes explained at Donating copyrighted materials. If you are not the owner of the external website but have permission from that owner, see Requesting copyright permission. However, even if you use one of these processes to release copyrighted material to Wikipedia, it still needs to comply with the other policies and guidelines to be eligible for inclusion. If you would like any assistance with this, you can ask a question at the help desk.

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Speed deletion. Mutalo Group article
Please help me with getting back article about Mutalo Group. Article was speed deletion because of accidental violation. I didn't mean to advertise my company in any way, all the links were from real articles. I own Mutalo Group trademark and can prove it if it is necessary. Any of the mistakes were made purposely. Please let me rewrite article and post it for the second time.

Regards Tomasz Nowowiejski

Tomasaddam (talk) 13:57, 19 January 2017 (UTC)


 * If you really "didn't mean to advertise", then you are so unaware of the nature of your own writing that you are likely to find it very difficult to edit about your company in the neutral way required for Wikipedia, because the whole page read from start to finish like advertising copy. One of the main reasons why Wikipedia's guidelines on conflict of interest discourage us from writing on subjects in which we have a close personal involvement is that it can be extremely difficult to stand back from the subject and see how one's writing will look to a neutral and uninvolved outsider, and that seems to have been so in your case.


 * You can create a new draft if you like, taking care not to write in a promotional way. However, it would be very difficult to give you specific advice on what sort of thing to avoid, because while there were some specific pieces of text which can be picked out as clearly promotional, such as "with the focus on bringing quality products at an affordable price to the African market" and "The energy drink industry in Africa tends to be saturated and offers either low-quality, cheap drinks or high-quality, expensive drinks. Kabisa is meant to bridge the gap that exists between those two options that are currently offered. The high-quality drinks are often very overpriced and make it impossible for many consumers to buy them", the problem was more deep-seated than that. The overall conception of the article as a whole was like a page written on behalf of the company to impress the reader with what a good job the company is doing, and it is not possible in that situation to give a list of changes that are necessary: what is needed is a completely different approach to the whole article.


 * My advice to new editors is that it is best to start by making small improvements to existing articles, rather than creating new articles. That way any mistakes you make will be small ones, and you won't have the discouraging experience of repeatedly seeing hours of work deleted. Gradually, you will get to learn how Wikipedia works, and after a while you will know enough about what is acceptable to be able to write whole new articles without fear that they will be deleted. Over the years I have found that editors who start by making small changes to existing articles and work up from there have a far better chance of having a successful time here than those who jump right into creating new articles from the start. Obviously, if you have no interest in contributing in any other way than using Wikipedia to publicise your company, then that advice won't be much help to you. However, if that is all you wish to do then you should probably not be editing Wikipedia at all. The editor who uses the pseudonym "JamesBWatson" (talk) 16:23, 19 January 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mutalo Group (March 30)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Mutalo Group and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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SwisterTwister  talk  16:09, 30 March 2017 (UTC)

Draft:Mutalo Group concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Mutalo Group, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 20:57, 24 September 2017 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Mutalo Group


Hello, Tomasaddam. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Mutalo Group".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the, , or  code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Legacypac (talk) 17:53, 16 October 2017 (UTC)