User talk:Tomcuth/sandbox

This is notably improved from Thursday, but still clearly a work in progress. A group member made edits yesterday without being signed in.Mringaterutgers (talk) 13:37, 17 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Generally much improved. It needs careful editing for "neutral tone."  In places, it sounds like an advertisement.Mringaterutgers (talk) 22:40, 8 December 2013 (UTC)