User talk:Tomica/Sandbox9

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It should be re-worded then. I know I told you to remove the bit about including them having written OG(ItW), WMH and S&M, but I think this would work better in Background section perhaps. Calvin  &bull; Talk That Talk 18:08, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Yeah, but if would be stupid If I mention that StarGate produced the song and add the additional information about the Loud singles, and then again mention them in the composition as the producers. It would be duplicated. — Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  18:11, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Previous singles that they have worked on isn't about the composition though, if you mention it, mention it in passing. Calvin  &bull; Talk That Talk  18:14, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
 * I will left as it is now. I asked Novice to check the sandbox again since he has done some c/e. I will also ask him for advice, how can I do it. — Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  18:17, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Aaron, do you mean this part: StarGate had previously produced three singles on Rihanna's previous studio album Loud (2010).[8] In an interview for the Norwegian website 730.no, Tor Erik Hermansen from StarGate, one of the producers of the song revealed that it was first time they had collaborated with Jay-Z. Hermansen further commented: "We are are very happy with the song and Jay's verse is crazy—same with Rihanna's part."[1]? – I didn't notice this before, it's in the composition section. It should be moved to the Background section. Also, the sentences: "Talk That Talk" was written by Ester Dean, Sean Combs and Jay-Z himself.[7] The production of the song was handled by Norwegian duo StarGate and Dean.[3] can also be moved to Background section. Novice7 (talk) 04:04, 17 November 2011 (UTC)
 * ✅ — Tomica1111  &bull;  Question Existing?  10:55, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

C/CR Sources

 * http://www.gigwise.com/news/68621/Rihanna-Talk-That-Talk---First-Review
 * http://www.digitalspy.co.uk/music/albumreviews/a351462/rihanna-talk-that-talk-album-review.html
 * http://www.mtv.com/news/articles/1674711/rihanna-talk-that-talk-tracks.jhtml
 * http://entertainment.time.com/2011/11/21/music-monday-rihannas-talk-that-talk/
 * http://www.nme.com/reviews/rihanna/12476
 * http://www.chicagotribune.com/entertainment/music/turnitup/chi-rihanna-album-review-talk-that-talk-reviewed-20111121,0,4041412.column
 * http://www.nydailynews.com/entertainment/music-arts/rihanna-bad-talk-talk-time-holidays-article-1.979914?localLinksEnabled=false
 * http://www.usatoday.com/life/music/reviews/story/2011-11-20/rihanna-talk-that-talk/51324366/1