User talk:Tommytb05/sandbox

review from Yuhao
Since it is not the full article, the section and structure are not needed The content has some grammar mistakes The sources are reliable but not cited in the content and not listed as Wikipedia style

Thank you for your feedback, you recognized my mistakes and structure***** — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tommytb05 (talk • contribs) 14:58, 4 April 2019 (UTC)