User talk:Tony1/Archive12/Archive 12 (31 March – 28 April 2008)

FAC Copy-Edit?
Hello Tony. I was hoping to ask if you would copy edit Tropical Storm Charley (1998) when you have time. It's up for FAC, and one of the commentators recommended getting a copy-edit. I've tried several times, but am having trouble with it. TheNobleSith (talk) 18:18, 30 March 2008 (UTC)

Max Mosely
Thank you for reviewing the article and your time, it's become quite a long read these days! Unfortunately due to some allegations published in the UK this article has been given protected status so I think I will have to withdraw my nomination (but i am going to sleep on that an see what the morning brings!). But when all the fuss has died down I am sure that your suggestions can be used to make it a better article.Tommy turrell (talk) 18:26, 30 March 2008 (UTC)

Irreplaceable
The article is now featured. Thanks for the help and leave me a message if you have more concerns. --Efe (talk) 01:43, 31 March 2008 (UTC)

Max Mosley
Thanks for your comments on Max Mosley. As you may have noticed, M. Mosley has been in the UK press in the last couple of days due to what the News of the World choose to call a 'Nazi sex orgy'. Hey ho - that was the final nail in the coffin of the FAC, and I'm currently unable to even edit the article. I'm told I can get an admin to make uncontroversial fixes, so we'll work on your recommendations. I wasn't clear about a couple of them, so I'd be grateful if you could help. Cheers. 4u1e (talk) 09:40, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
 * "separated from his parents while they were interned in Britain during the Second World War."—um ... they were German-born? If so, say so, or the readers will wonder why they were gaoled.
 * No, they were not German-born. In the simplest terms, they were interned because they were fascists, which is already mentioned in the lead. Pretty well all registered fascists were interned, although many of them were released long before Sir Oswald. In more detail, Sir Oswald was the leader of Britain's most significant fascist party and had called for a negotiated peace with Nazi Germany. Lady Diana was a friend of Hitler, who had attended their wedding(!) at Goebbels' house shortly before the Second World War. There was also a security clampdown sparked by a spying scandal. I think all that is necessary is say 'Like all registered fascists in the UK, Mosley's parents were interened....'. Do you agree? Oh yes, that's just fine. Tony   (talk)  10:34, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
 * '"He became president of the FIA, FISA's parent body, in 1993."—No comma, please. In reverse, a comma after 1993 if at the start of the sentence, yes.'
 * Can you elaborate for a poor confused soul? Which of the two commas? They're there to split off 'FISA's parent body' as a subordinate clause, i.e. one that can be left out. How do you feel about 'In 1993, he became president of the FIA, FISA's parent body.'? Oops, my fault—didn't take in the whole clause at once. It's fine, but start "In 1993, he became ..." to avoid a comma, if you want.
 * Many thanks for the clarifications. Guess we'll wait a little while and start again. . Cheers. 4u1e (talk) 11:57, 31 March 2008 (UTC)

Roman Catholic Church
Hi Tony, I am considering renomination of this article for FA. I would like to know if you see any obvious problems with the article before I resubmit. I am contacting you on the advice of Karanacs who suggested I ask previous commentors to take a look and see if previous FAC issues have been sufficiently addressed. Your nicer side would be appreciated. Thanks.
 * You certainly won't get any "nicer" side by saying that, which comes across as snide. Tony   (talk)  00:42, 1 April 2008 (UTC)

Re: Featured article candidates/The Mummy (1999 film)
I think I have addressed your grammar concerns. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk ) 21:05, 31 March 2008 (UTC)

Best Conjunction?
OK, in:

Predators include the Peregrine Falcon, Golden Eagle and Eurasian Eagle-owl, and the Common Raven will take nestlings

what conjunction would you use after comma, "and" or "while" or something else? Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 21:35, 31 March 2008 (UTC)


 * Unless you regard, in your specific context of Predation, the common raven's eating of nestlings as fundamentally dissociated from or contrary to the peregrine falcon's &c. eating of adults, "while" is inappropriate and "and" is fine.


 * However, you should consider inserting a comma after "Golden Eagle". I know many people preach style over content, and go red in the face if you suggest the oxford comma, but unless you genuinely intend to imply that the golden eagle and the eagle owl are near-cognates, your current structure is slightly {balky, clumsy, under-comprehensible}.  Generally, lists' constituents are more easily discerned when they are consistently distinguished.


 * i.e.: Predators include the Peregrine Falcon, Golden Eagle, and Eurasian Eagle-owl, and the Common Raven will take nestlings


 * You should also consider replacing your last comma with a semicolon. Same reason: clarity of your intent for the reader.  Punctuation (and layout &c.) is used by the average reader as a cue to the writer's intent, and when you overlap the syntax of two semantically related clauses as you are doing here, there needs to be a very clear distinction between the contents of the 1st and the 2nd clauses, which by use of commas throughout you are muddling.


 * i.e.: Predators include the Peregrine Falcon, Golden Eagle, and Eurasian Eagle-owl; and the Common Raven will take nestlings


 * Alternatively, of course, you could simply leave it as it is. It's perhaps not as clear as it might be, but there's nothing wrong with it.


 * cheers,
 * Saltation (talk) 00:56, 1 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Thanks for that, as I read it, I just found the "and" a bit insubstantial with the result that the Raven bit just sort of ran on, even though there was a different emphasis, which is why I liked "while" but recalled reading somewhere that "while" was not a good choice. I just like to throw things up once in a while (figuratively, not literally!). Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 01:02, 1 April 2008 (UTC)

your note
Though we've never really crossed paths, I'm a long-time admirer of your editorial prowess. That you would say this to me means a great deal.--The Fat Man Who Never Came Back (talk) 00:59, 2 April 2008 (UTC)

Nguyen Ngoc Tho
Can you explain what you mean by "bend over"?  Blnguyen  ( bananabucket ) 06:38, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Nhu's bodyguard slapped him in the face.  Blnguyen  ( vote in the photo straw poll ) 06:56, 2 April 2008 (UTC)

Is my copyediting regressive? . Thanks again,  Blnguyen  ( bananabucket ) 01:42, 8 April 2008 (UTC)

Punctuation
You're right. I just took a closer look and now I see it. Sorry about the mistake, which I've fixed. SlimVirgin talk| edits 15:35, 2 April 2008 (UTC)

MoS frustration
Tony, something has to be done. I am to the point of throwing up my hands and ignoring MoS, but I suspect that would only please some of the MoS detractors, so I try to hang in there and figure out those pages at least once a week. After the time I spent there today, all I've come away with is confusion about captions, italics in headings, forcing image sizes, and the perennial dash issues. (It's a frightening thought that image captions could be patterned after some of those written by DCGeist, who tends towards writing a paragraph in image captions.) G guy started a WikiProject so things could be sorted out; what happened there? He is a reasonable editor, who works consensually—have you considered working on and strengthening the WikiProject with him? I know many editors are disgusted with and frustrated at trying to follow those acrimonious discussions on MoS and would be glad to help do whatever it takes to get them to stop and to sort out the mess, but they have no interest in wading into the ongoing insults from PMA et al. You've got to retain the upperhand and never return the insults or respond to the needling, or others will continue to stay away. I don't have time anymore to spearhead or help launch a WikiProject; someone has to take that bull by the horns and get the MoS pages sorted out. If that doesn't work, it may be time for an RFCU to address the core disruption; this has gone too far and has gone too long. I'll be out most of the afternoon. Sandy Georgia (Talk) 16:50, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I also left a note for G guy, and reminded him that this constant shuttling between the two of you is getting expensive and is interfering with my beauty sleep; please start picking up first class airfare so I can sleep on the flights :-)  Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 17:37, 2 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Tony, let me know if there is anything I can do to help with MoS issues. Talk or e-mail. -- Laser brain   (talk)  18:01, 2 April 2008 (UTC)

Re: 1988 PHS FAC Comment
I believe I have addressed your one MoS comment at the FAC. Hello32020 (talk) 21:35, 2 April 2008 (UTC)

Weather front
Hi, thanks for your comments on Weather fronts FAC. I believe (and I hope) that I have addressed most of your concerns. Do you think there is anything else that needs to be done? Juliancolton The storm still blows...  23:16, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I've fixed even more issues that other people have noticed. Do you think it is ready for you to support? Juliancolton The storm still blows...  14:39, 5 April 2008 (UTC)

Captain Scott
Thank you for supporting this at FAC. Still feel free to make comments - the article can always be improved. Or save your fire for Shackleton, whose Transantarctic Expedition will be at FA soon. Brianboulton (talk) 10:43, 3 April 2008 (UTC)

Richard Dawkins
Dear Tony: You may not have noticed, but your FAC critique of Richard Dawkins supported the views I had expressed there under the heading "Not ready yet", although you wrote with more specificity and pungency. Some of us are trying to improve the article, which could reach FA with sufficient work. We could use your help there, especially since you have already analyzed what needs to be done. Finell (Talk) 18:33, 3 April 2008 (UTC)

Tone cluster
Thanks for your observations and tweaks. Let me know if I've successfully addressed the questions you raised: diff.

I feel compelled to explain about heavy metal. The admirable WesleyDodds solicited my assistance. I cursed and wailed: Why, Dear God, Why Heavy? Fucking? Metal? Let's check out my qualifications: I own exactly two metal albums—Motörhead's Orgasmatron and 1916. (Of course, I love Led Zep, too, but have no albums for tedious historic reasons. There is my beloved 45 of "Hey, Hey, What Can I Do," though.) I think of "Helter Skelter" as my favorite heavy metal song; PJ Harvey's "Long Snake Moan" as my second favorite. "Kashmir" is my favorite Zep song, but is it metal? Never, even in my most feverish dreams, did I imagine myself laying an editorial hand on this subject matter... Well, I can't wait to see you grappling with Deathrocker over the appropriate level of attention to devote to...um...Edguy and Hammerfall. Edguy and Hammerfall. I may cry... Of course I'll help. WesleyDodds, that callow, treacherous SOB, moved on after the article achieved FA status. I, loyal and conscientious to a fault, remained behind to tend our cheerless charge for evermore. I feel about it the way I like to imagine Barbara Bush feels about her most (un)fortunate son. Best, Dan.—DCGeist (talk) 20:44, 3 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Thanks again—excellent ideas. See what you think: diff. As for linking within the now much-reduced quote, per our bloody, bloodied MoS, I believe "there is a good reason to do so"—in this case, the quote (a) introduces significant terms (b) likely unfamiliar to many laymen (c) that it would be ungainly to include and link elsewhere in the section. —DCGeist (talk) 21:06, 4 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Upon further reflection, the Nicholls quote had to go. Here's the diff.—DCGeist (talk) 06:47, 5 April 2008 (UTC)

Emile Lemoine
I managed to get two people (three if you count WBOSITG and Epr's to be separate ones) to do a copyedit. Would you see if I've addressed your "and more"? Nousernamesleft copper, not wood 01:03, 4 April 2008 (UTC)


 * I updated the ref. Nousernamesleft copper, not wood 20:45, 6 April 2008 (UTC)

April 7 Dispatch draft

 * FCDW/April 7, 2008 Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 04:00, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
 * No apology necessary. I'm not sure it made much sense out of context or for those uninitiated in the mysteries of FAC (and I'm not sure Sandy wasn't pulling my leg by linking me to WP:WBFAN). Yomangani talk 08:36, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Ha ! I linked Yomangani to WBFAN because I know how he feels about it :-)  Guys, I love that quote; it sums up a lot about FAC.  Can we pretty pretty please find a way to explain the context so it can be kept?  Those articles get attention, others don't, is the idea.  Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 16:38, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I moved your version from the talk page to the main page, but kept the quote, as I really want to figure out how to make it work. Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 16:53, 4 April 2008 (UTC)

I tweaked it to try to provide context; better now? Sandy Georgia (Talk) 02:17, 9 April 2008 (UTC)

my acitivites curtailed until WP's technical glitch is resolved
Village_pump_%28technical%29 Tony   (talk)  01:30, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Tony, I had the same problem earlier today, don't understand it, but Gimmetrow fixed it. For him to be able to edit your monobook, you have to give him explicit permission. Sandy Georgia (Talk) 01:40, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Oh thank the lord (the lord is Gimmetrow!)—I cleared my cache as she advised, and the yoke around my neck was released! Tony   (talk)  01:44, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Happened to me when I was trying to promote/archive (which requires opening six or seven tabs at the same time); wanted to scream. Don't know where I'd be without Gimmetrow.  Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 01:53, 5 April 2008 (UTC)

I left a question for you here. Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 14:36, 5 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Can't see a specific question for me there. Tony   (talk)  12:44, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
 * The question is what you think of quarterly publication in the Dispatch, and what Jan thru Mar would look like. Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 14:57, 6 April 2008 (UTC)

Oort cloud
I've given the article a root and branch copyedit. Let me know what you think.  Serendi pod ous  13:23, 5 April 2008 (UTC)

Prague Spring
I've changed the wording a bit, better? The Dominator (talk) 14:21, 5 April 2008 (UTC)

Chough
Re your oppose on Red-billed Chough, and the need for a fresh pair of eyes, I asked you for help at 0658 on 23 March, but reply came there not. Thanks a lot. Jimfbleak (talk) 15:23, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Replied to this outburst on Jim's talk page. Tony   (talk)  16:35, 6 April 2008 (UTC)


 * I understand that, but it would have been nice to have had a reply. I also appreciate that it's difficult to see your own errors - I read and reread Chough countless times looking for potential pitfalls after reading your style guide. I do quite a few GA reviews (including Emperor Penguin incidentally), and it's much easier to see other people's infelicities.


 * I suppose one thing I find irksome at FA (not just you) is having very minor errors pointed out, whereas I tend to fix such things myself when reviewing at GA. The other thing that is particularly annoying at FA is contributors (not you at all) who come up with endless lists of suggestions, and then don't vote either way. Anyway, forget the minor tirade above, pax vobiscum Jimfbleak (talk) 17:06, 6 April 2008 (UTC)

Decorative fonts within text ?
See Nahuatl, is that OK with MoS? Sandy Georgia (Talk) 16:30, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Unsure. Who's a good person to ask? Tony   (talk)  16:34, 6 April 2008 (UTC)

I don't know, but that makes three different fonts in one article (look at the sources). My only experience with graphic design has been in playbills and gala invitations, and I was always told that more than two fonts created visual confusion and was a no-no. Sandy Georgia (Talk) 16:37, 6 April 2008 (UTC)  (Four when you include the italics;  too much going on visually.)  Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 16:37, 6 April 2008 (UTC)

MoS update, dispatch question
OK, I moved my question to Wikipedia talk:Featured content dispatch workshop, since it's a specific Dispatch question. That is, is it worth it to take one out of four monthly Dispatches for this, or would a quarterly update be better? And, we should include things like the change in instructions at FAC for driveby noms. Sandy Georgia (Talk) 18:30, 6 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Let's see how it pans out. I've asked Dank55 to consider taking on a few pages: it's an easily divisible, and thus delegatable, task. User:Tony1/Monthly_updates_of_styleguide_and_policy_changes Tony   (talk)  12:34, 7 April 2008 (UTC)


 * To put it as plainly as I can :-) ... I have a very hard time following Dank55's writing. It exhausts me.  Whether we allocate a monthly or quarterly slot to this at WP:FCDW to me depends in part on what you can commit to.  I want a clear, succinct write up of changes, because the verbosity at MoS is part of why I now avoid the talk page there.  Editors just need to know what the changes are, without all the verbosity that is found on the MoS talk page.  It's illuminating that hundreds of KB of discussion at that page actually results in such little change when you look at it on a quarterly basis.  Anyway.  I need to know what to do this month.  If you take the April 14 Dispatch slot, can you do a write up that introduces/announces your new page and summarizes the changes so far this year? I'd like to give it to you quarterly, if you can commit. If not, the DYK people have done a writeup and I can give them the 14th.  Please let me know.  Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 18:26, 7 April 2008 (UTC)

initiative
congratulations on your initiative. for people like me, who tend to carelessly pass over details, its very useful to have a way to make sure we don't fall too far behind. (smile) DGG (talk) 03:07, 7 April 2008 (UTC)

Oort cloud comment
Comment on RJH's review—Just shoving a "Support" in here and providing no evidence of having looked at the article is regrettable. We really need to engage with the material, or even a portion of it, to make this a high-quality process. The nominators and the project deserve it. Please tell us just a little about why you support it, please.


 * Tony1: look under the hidden gray box in the FAC. Also see the article history for April 2–3. I added more comments today and I have also changed my position based on recent edits.&mdash;RJH (talk) 15:13, 7 April 2008 (UTC)


 * It would be helpful if the planet articles would come to FAC better prepared; since the editors bringing them are all experienced FA writers, it's surprising that they continue to appear at FAC with the same issues as in previous FACs, in need of better sourcing, consistent ref formatting, MoS cleanup and copyediting. I guess that may have been the point Tony was making about the Support. It's understandable for first- and second-time FA nominators, but not when the same issues come up in every planet FAC presented, and reviewers have to repeat issues that were covered in many other planet FACs. Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 19:04, 7 April 2008 (UTC)


 * RJH, thanks for letting me know. Tony   (talk)  01:14, 8 April 2008 (UTC)

WP:Layout
Tony, Sandy requests your help at WT:Layout. It concerns a very short section, dealing with end sections. We've already crossed the big hurdle; we've gone 3.5 days with no one arguing in favor of "no recommendation for order of end sections", which was a very long-running debate a month ago, and a pretty wide range of people have been notified to speak up at this point, so I think we're in the clear. Anyway, Sandy mentions the 3 other problems, all of which are right; mainly, the names of the end sections don't match the names of end sections in WP:MOS. If you want to rewrite it, great; if you want to tell me what you'd like to see, that works too. - Dan Dank55 (talk) 00:17, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
 * P.S. Also, Sandy was saying that in some cases, you don't want to advise people to alphabetize lists; I'm guessing she felt that it was either trivial or self-evident. In the discussion right below WT:Layout, last comment dated March 6, you'll see that we were wondering what to advise about alphabetization in See also links, because opinions seemed to be all over the place.  We found that most GAs with not a lot of See also links didn't alphabetize; others did.  Some people grouped their See also links, and generally denoted that by putting them out of alphabetical order; they thought that made it obvious what the grouping was, and it didn't.  You have a lot more experience with this than I do; feel free to make a recommendation. - Dan Dank55 (talk) 00:24, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I don't care what GAs do or don't do; they have no community standards, and each GA is only as good as the latest editor one cut above a troll, sock or vandal who may have passed the GA. I also con't care if we alphabetize or not (but we're pushing it by telling editors how to organize lists), but regardless, we don't put self-references into the article text, by specifically adding a line saying to alphabetize, which is what was there before.  Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 00:36, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Perhaps raise this at MOS main page with a link from Layout? Tony   (talk)  02:23, 8 April 2008 (UTC)

Nguyen Ngoc Tho
Update. I've done a full copyedit. Thanks,  Blnguyen  ( bananabucket ) 03:22, 8 April 2008 (UTC)

Thanks!
Wow! Coming from the master, the ultimate "word nerd" himself, that means a lot. Thanks! indopug (talk) 04:50, 8 April 2008 (UTC)

New WMF Licensing Policy?
In this edit, you mention a new licensing policy, promulgated from 23 March 2008. But the link is only to the WMF wiki front page, and though I looked further, I couldn't find anything. Can you help? Where has this been mentioned on-wiki? Carcharoth (talk) 14:02, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Ta, my goof; fixed. Tony   (talk)  14:12, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
 * What you've linked to is not a new resolution. It is a clause of a resolution passed on 23 March 2007 that came into effect on 23 March 2008. In practice, it seems to have had little effect, as I haven't yet seen people changing their practice based on that more stringent wording. Probably largely because no-one is sure what it means. Or rather, only some of our NFCC criteria can be decided mechanically, and others are subjective and need discussion. So that clause shouldn't, in theory, change how things are done here, as we already (after a period of notification and/or discussion) delete images that fail our EDP. The WMF resolution is silent on how long such periods of notification and/or discussion should be, so presumably that is decided (within reason) on a project-by-project basis. In our case, the periods range from 2 to 5 to 7 days, and within those time periods people are allowed to contest the proposed deletion. Carcharoth (talk) 14:32, 8 April 2008 (UTC)

General
I know you you don't normal copy-edit and I know we sometimes disagree on how much needs to be trimmed in order to (couldn't resist) eliminate redundancy, but could I request you give The General in His Labyrinth the once-over on Thursday just before the authors put it in for FAC? It isn't ready yet: it's part of a class project that finishes on Thursday and they are keen to get it nominated by the deadline, so they are still working on it. It doesn't have to be the full works - a quick skim through to pick up any obvious boo-boos we may have missed would help. I'll drop you a note when it is closer to being "finished". Yomangani talk 15:12, 8 April 2008 (UTC)

Tropical Storm Barry (2007) FAC comment
Thanks for reviewing the article, and I responded to your comments on the FAC. ♬♩ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 15:40, 8 April 2008 (UTC)

ENGVAR
You really need to see the show at Talk:Rotavirus; what a timesink and an affront to a perfectly fine article and editor. Sandy Georgia (Talk) 23:25, 8 April 2008 (UTC)
 * There's hardly any text there at all ... Tony   (talk)  16:36, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
 * It's archived; see the last archive. DOn't miss it.  Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 16:37, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Talk:Rotavirus/archive3 Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 16:39, 9 April 2008 (UTC)

Jack Kemp FAC
I am glad to see that your real life workload is a 1 today. I was not quite sure what to do about your April 6th complaint that the Jack Kemp article was troubled by "bizarre, awkward, unexplained structures and wordings" because the complaint did not give me much actionable guidance. A subsequent editor complained of choppiness and passive voice which gave me grammatical changes to look for. I spent the whole day attempting to address his concerns in this regard and hope this might be what was necessary to converted you to support or at least neutral. here is what I did today that may have addressed your concerns.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTD) 03:00, 9 April 2008 (UTC)


 * I have renominated Jack Kemp which you previously opposed. I made a very solid effort to improve its grammar and structure, which I mentioned to you previously.  I also have augmented the article by adding additional quality sources.  I hope for your support now.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTD) 00:02, 21 April 2008 (UTC)

Richard Dawkins
Hello Tony. How are you? You opposed the FA nomination of Richard Dawkins. We have made some necessary changes. I would like you to see the article. Do you think the article is ready for the FA status? Regards, Masterpiece2000 (talk) 08:54, 9 April 2008 (UTC)

Image:FA on main page (for the Signpost).png
I am putting the non-GFDL license on Image:FA on main page (for the Signpost).png as it contains the Wikipedia logo. Have a nice day. asenine t/c 13:51, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
 * And I changed it again to Wikipedia-screenshot. It is copyrighted by the Wikimedia foundation because of the logo but is good for use in the signpost. Woody (talk) 14:16, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
 * We all have our part to play ;) Where we would be without prose aficionados like yourself? Woody (talk) 14:35, 9 April 2008 (UTC)

How's it goin?
Hey! Just wanted to see how your doing! Life going well? My goal is to make friends with every single person on wikipedia! Will you be my wiki-friend? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.229.227.142 (talk) 15:23, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Not if you're anon. Tony   (talk)  16:34, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
 * The IP was blocked by the way. Part of the Southern Adventist University IP block that left this evocative speech on my talkpage. Woody (talk) 16:39, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
 * One for the rubbish bins of all those organisations! A genuine maddie. Tony   (talk)  16:46, 9 April 2008 (UTC)

WORLDHEALTH map
There is nothing else to do. An admin will review and process the request soon. -Regards Nv8200p talk 17:37, 9 April 2008 (UTC)

I need to ask
I am at a loss here. It appears it has taken me 33 years and a Masters degree in English literature to learn I have no idea how to write. I need to know what it is you expect from me, because I do not intend to stop this process until the Solar System project is complete. You and I are stuck with one another, and I can't imagine you have enjoyed these encounters any more than I have, so please, tell me what it is you want me to do. Is there a book I could read? an aphorism I could swallow? A rabbit's foot I could rub? What?  Serendi pod ous  22:01, 9 April 2008 (UTC)

MoS
I saw your edit here. How should US be formatted? With or withour periods? TY. --Efe (talk) 02:35, 10 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I see. I thought your an American. But adding dots is not a breach to MoS. I could write with dots; but it sometimes annoy me. It looks lie, duh. Anyway, I'm not the editor of The Wiggles. It just happened that I contributed a review during its GAN. Thanks for your output in "Irreplaceable"'s FAC. Thanks for the reply. Im not English-native so Im learning from you. Thank again. Keep up the good work in FAC and FAR. =) --Efe (talk) 06:35, 10 April 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for the copyedit
I just rewrote the middle section at WP:GAU, and I think you'll like the tone better; I do. Feel free to suggest any useful changes, including copyediting. - Dan Dank55 (talk) 20:48, 10 April 2008 (UTC)

NFCC 8 revisited
You were involved in this discussion, so I thought you might be interested in Wikipedia talk:Non-free content.  howcheng  {chat} 21:04, 10 April 2008 (UTC)

Copy editing being reverted
Hi, I just noticed this from last month, where you had to struggle to tidy the writing. If you find yourself being reverted like that again (on any page), where it really is just a question of cleaning up the writing, feel free to give me a shout. SlimVirgin talk| edits 01:27, 11 April 2008 (UTC)


 * I read the copyedit in question, I want to timidly add one point ... timidly because I only have the answer to one tiny question. We recently did some rewriting at WP:V.  On a page like WP:V, where people are parsing with a fine-toothed comb, "legal" principles should, on occasion, win out over style questions, such as the "unnecessary" repetition of words.  It's a trick lawyers use: if you minimize the number of words that can be broadly interpreted, then you speed up the rate at which the meaning of those words will be nailed down by common practice.  You two may be way ahead of me on this, but I just want to make sure we have a meeting of the minds on the general principle: some policy pages should have language which doesn't "flow" in some ideal sense, because there are other considerations. - Dan Dank55 (talk) 12:27, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
 * For all their obscene hourly rates and the centrality of language to their job, lawyers in my experience have appalling language skills—worse, they're lazy and sloppy about writing, too. So I wouldn't put legal linguistic practice up as a benchmark, or accept lawyers' "excuses" for repetitions and ungainliness. I believe it's quite possible to write precisely and smoothly and in good style for legal purposes; pinning down meanings later does not belong in the same basket as these excuses. Tony   (talk)  12:36, 11 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Right, when you say "these excuses" it's clear you're referring to the text in question. To give a specific example of the general case I'm talking about: we just had a very well-attended discussion at WP:V, and I got some language to stick.  Arguably, using variants of the word "reasonable" in back-to-back sentences is not great style.  What I'm saying is that, if a wikignome dropped by tomorrow and made an edit and left a note saying "the language didn't flow", he would get reverted, and the reversion would probably stick, because of this principle that a lot of people paid careful attention to the language, and decided to deliberately leave language that perhaps was not the most stylistic English, because they thought or hoped that make the job of nailing down the interpretation easier. - Dan Dank55 (talk) 12:51, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Can you give me a specific example? Tony   (talk)  12:58, 11 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Sure. At WP:V, we had an RfC and invited WP:VPP in, and at the moment it looks like the end result is going to be that several of my edits are going to stick.  One sentence that isn't mine (except for the word "reasonably") now reads: "Any material lacking a reliable source may be removed, but editors may reasonably object if you remove material without giving them sufficient time to provide references."  I gave two reasons for the addition, the first being that "may" by itself could ambiguously mean "might" or "can", the second being that Blueboar and others who know what they're talking about seemed to feel that the word is one for which  common practice has nailed down an accepted, workable interpretation.
 * My only real point here is a small one: to enumerate the exceptions to wikignomery being a good thing. This is one, I think: in a core content policy, which can have manifold unintended consequences if you screw around with it too much, when considering words which necessarily have a broad interpretation, it's best to use the words that have established "precedent", that have worked well "in the trenches", over other possible choices.  There's a "reasonable" in the sentence after that, and theoretically, if a wikignome comes through and changes one of them, saying that it doesn't sound stylistically right to repeat the word, my argument would be that, in core content policies, it's more important to use the words that are well-defined than to use mellifluous words.
 * On a completely different subject: the more I think about summary boxes, the more I like them. I would like to do as many as I have the time to do; even though I like the camaraderie of article reviewing, and I will get up to speed on that soon, this seems more important.  I need to do a lot of back-reading in style pages and archives, then I'll have some specific suggestions for what I think will be helpful. - Dan Dank55 (talk) 20:00, 11 April 2008 (UTC)

User claims that wp:mosnum mandates date links
There is a discussion at Bot_requests. Please look at the comments by User:Huaiwei. It indicates that there is confusion about what wp:mosnum means in respect of linking dates. Either it is compulsory or it is not, yet two experienced editors have read the text and one concluded that it is compulsory and the other concluded that it is not.

Your thoughts would be welcome. Lightmouse (talk) 09:21, 11 April 2008 (UTC)

Sorry, didn't mean to offend you
You're a long time editor, so I figured I could just tell stuff to you straight, and your skin would be thick enough. ;-)

I'm surprised you would be shocked, surprised or hurt by anything that happened re WP:NFCC, since each element contributing to this situation has been previously decently documented AFAICT, including consequences of getting it either right or wrong. Are there flaws in the documentation?

Sorry if I inadvertently offended you. Obviously you're a great wikipedian, and I appreciate seeing you around. :-) Can we assume good faith on each other's part? :-)

--Kim Bruning (talk) 12:34, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Talk pages are by far not as important as the actual pages they are attached to, and people typically patrol the actual pages, and ignore talk page discussion until and unless something comes up.
 * This is why edits to the actual pages are the decision points, and why it might take some time for a patrolling editor to pick up on a problem.
 * From that point of view, "I missed it" suddenly sounds like a fairly straightforward and logical explanation. This is such a common occurrence that we even have a policy at Consensus Can Change which documents why this is so, and that states that anyone may come along at a later date and make a change. This applies to articles as much as it does to policies.
 * I don't think your sympathy or lack of it (or any other feelings) have much to do with anything; it's a rational system, and that's just how the system works. This rationality needn't be a bad thing though, because rational agents also don't get hurt so much. :-)
 * Does that make sense?
 * --Kim Bruning (talk) 13:04, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Not really! Tony   (talk)  13:12, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
 * *muttermutterhoistmuttermutterpetardmuttermutter*
 * Ok, where did I lose you? :) --Kim Bruning (talk) 13:15, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Well, my take is that if people are going to be so thingy about the policy, they should be watching the talk page. But let's put that behind us and see if we can move the wording on ... Tony   (talk)  14:02, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Meh, probably true ;-) But they do have the right. :-) --Kim Bruning (talk) 14:06, 11 April 2008 (UTC)

Featured article reviewing
Tony, pursuant to your Dispatch, please have a look at sentiments expressed by reviewers here. As I read it, most reviewers are like I was: they don't want "prestige" or "clout" or more work; they just want to be thanked (Giano's chocolates). I want to work on that. Sandy Georgia (Talk) 22:15, 11 April 2008 (UTC)

Request for Help: Synthesizer article
Hi Tony, hope you're doing well. Not sure if you remember me, but if not, you reviewed some FACs of mine and helped me out with copy-editing tasks in the past. Right now I am working on the synthesizer article. I have not copy-edited it. At the moment, my priority is on reorganizing the sections, removing stuff that makes no sense (there was a lot of that), and finding sources to provide good citations throughout. You can see what it looked like before I started working on it here. If you can help out at all (even a peer review would be good, see here) Just let me know by replying here on my Talk page (or on this talk page). Thanks! — Wackymacs (talk) 19:03, 12 April 2008 (UTC)

Closed RfA
Hi. :) You seem to have inadvertently contributed a comment to a closed RfA, here. Since these are not meant to be changed so that the archived version preserves the discussion as of the time of closure, I just wanted to point this out so that you could remove your comment. Perhaps it could be placed at the RfA's talk page instead? --Moonriddengirl (talk) 15:33, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I figured it was an accident. :D --Moonriddengirl (talk) 16:10, 13 April 2008 (UTC)

FAC Review
Comments such as this do not belong in a Featured Article Review. Ottava Rima (talk) 16:48, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Well, I was quite concerned that I'd cop it too. You seem to have dealt with one of my colleagues already. Tony   (talk)  16:56, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
 * If you are unable to WP:AGF, then maybe Wikipedia isn't the place for you. Ottava Rima (talk) 16:58, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Only going on the previous evidence and trying to protect myself. Looks as though it was necessary. Tony   (talk)  17:04, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Is this your admission that you are unwilling to assume good faith and abide by standard Wikipedia rules? Ottava Rima (talk) 17:12, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
 * No. I think you're harassing me on my talk page, the very thing I asked you not to do. Please desist, and I encourage you to work on the nomination rather than bicker here. Tony   (talk)  17:44, 13 April 2008 (UTC)

The General in His Labyrinth
The students are planning on nominating it later today (later your yesterday), so any odd moments you can spare to tweak the prose beforehand will be appreciated. Thanks, Yomangani talk 01:07, 14 April 2008 (UTC)

Dispatch Apr 14
Tony, I must get my taxes done (Apr 15 deadline in the USA), and I'm behind today. Do you have a chance to look at WP:FCDW/April 14, 2008? Sandy Georgia (Talk) 16:12, 14 April 2008 (UTC)

Richard Dawkins at FAC again
Featured article candidates/Richard Dawkins, again. Thought you might like to know, since you did a FAC review of the same article recently. Finell (Talk) 19:32, 14 April 2008 (UTC)

Valley Parade FAC
Hi there. I think all your comments at the Valley Parade FAC have now been addressed, by either myself or two other editors, who have been involved in improving and copy-editing the work. I'd really appreciate it, if you could take another luck at the FAC. Thanks Peanut4 (talk) 23:55, 14 April 2008 (UTC)

Soliciting of support for criticism of articles
Little edit frazzle here, clearly, that involved an entreaty to agree that a certain article "sucks". A user's talk page is certainly not the place for that, and in any case, as a FA reviewer, I want to come to nominations without such ... priming. Tony  (talk)  07:05, 15 April 2008 (UTC)

Navenby
Hello, sorry to trouble you, but I just wondered if I could ask a favour. You were kind enough to leave some comments about this article the last time it was up for FAC, which I hope I have addressed correctly, and I wondered if you could cast your eye over it again and decide if you could give your support to it? . It has been through a tough Peer Review, won Good Article status and has been vigorously copy-edited since the last time. I've also had to remove a lot of the photos, to fit in with FA standard, so it doesn't look quite the same, and the refs have all been tightened up too. (It has two supports so far, and no opposes, so fingers crossed!). Many thanks, -- seahamlass  10:02, 15 April 2008 (UTC)


 * I wrote the above and saved it - then realised what you had written in the bit above about soliciting comments for FAC articles... I was going to revert my edit, but you could have still seen it anyway. Please, please don't feel you have to have a look!-- seahamlass  11:51, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Ah, no problem here; the entries in question were partisan and offensive. Not interested in taking sides elsewhere in these matters. Tony   (talk)  12:44, 15 April 2008 (UTC)

FAC Pierce Brosnan
I have done all that you said. Anything left? Ultra! 16:52, 15 April 2008 (UTC)

History of Norwich City F.C.
Hi. I've been on wikibreak (still am, technically) due to some unpleasant crap IRL. Noticed your comments at this FAC. My "usual" copyeditor (as it were), Casliber, has already been through the article and I suspect that some of the problem you're detecting is due to fixing of problems raised at the FAC. I could be wrong. At the risk of being irritating (I know your opinions are always carefully considered) would you mind scanning the article once more and dropping me a line to say whether you think there's a general, widespread problem, or if there are just a few tweaks required here and there. If the problem is widespread, I'm a bit stuck for finding a copyeditor, as apart from Casliber, my other choices of copyeditor are limited, as ALoan has sadly gone from the Project and I am too close to the piece to do a good job. NB The "thereafter" is very Dwellerish :-) --Dweller (talk) 10:55, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Hi Tony, I'd appreciate a response as RL will drag me back into Wikibreak from this afternoon, and your's is the only outstanding substantial barrier to FA. Cheers. --Dweller (talk) 11:05, 17 April 2008 (UTC)

Cheers. If it reassures you further, Yomangan just did another c-e of it. --Dweller (talk) 13:32, 17 April 2008 (UTC)

Featured article candidates/Pierce Brosnan
Please strike comments. Ultra! 20:58, 16 April 2008 (UTC)

Emery Molyneux
You asked at Featured article candidates/Emery Molyneux, where you gave provisional support, for a thorough copyedit by someone other than the main editor, JackLee. Now that the article is at the bottom of the FAC page, I have grasped the nettle and carried out a thorough copyedit. I would be very grateful if you could revisit this FAC to see if you are now able to consummate your support. Cheers. qp10qp (talk) 00:18, 17 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Many thanks. The article now has three supports and no opposes, which augurs well. qp10qp (talk) 15:50, 17 April 2008 (UTC)

Featured article candidates/1962 South Vietnamese Independence Palace bombing
Hi Tony. Roger Davies has kindly done a copule of rounds of copyedit. Please take another look. Thanks,  Blnguyen  ( bananabucket ) 06:30, 17 April 2008 (UTC)

Wikipedia:FCDW/April 21, 2008 and footnotes
I really appreciate the summaries of changes, because it's so easy to miss things that have changed. Your dedication to the style guidelines is impressive.

I noticed on the April 21 summary you listed a change to WP:Footnotes about "or poorly sourced" being added. I think this has been in the beginning of that guideline for a long time. I looked through all the diffs since March 1 and don't see it added anywhere else. I'm not sure what's up there. &mdash; Carl (CBM · talk) 14:04, 17 April 2008 (UTC)


 * No, that's my mistake. I followed an internal link, which obscured the section title, so I saw only the page title (April 21) and the description of the change. That change to match WP:V isn't concerning to me, but I was concerned maybe there was a change somewhere else that I had missed. Thanks for the very fast reply. &mdash; Carl (CBM · talk) 14:29, 17 April 2008 (UTC)

Tony, something's off in your mention of portraits facing in; Awadewit was behind that change a very long time ago (so long, it's hard for me to remember ... it came up on a FAC, and I remember her addressing it at MoS ... perhaps it's on a supbpage?) I'll ping her and ask her to have a look, but since she's busy and probably won't have time to track it down, it might need rephrasing. Sandy Georgia (Talk) 15:22, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Images facing text wasn't inserted in March; it's been there for a very long time (I remember because it came up on a FAC with Awadewit before Raul delegated me). It was in MoS at least by January 1; it's not a new addition ... not sure why your diffs are showing it as new ?  Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 15:54, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Ack. Then that diff highlights a redundancy and fix needed to MoS, because Awadewit's exception/point is just two bullets below that addition.  Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 16:15, 17 April 2008 (UTC)

To edit a transcluded page, just grab the text between the ; that is the actual page that you will edit. Those bracket thingies "transclude" it to another page. For an example, look at WP:FAC in edit mode; it is nothing but a whole lot of transcluded pages, and you know how to edit each of those pages. Sandy Georgia (Talk) 16:43, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
 * ah, sorry, that's because when there's only a / followed by a pagename, that is appended to the full page. Think of:
 * Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/article name
 * and
 * /archive1
 * The full article would be
 * Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/article name/archive1
 * I'll figure out where you're having a problem and be back in a second with the full article names for you. Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 16:51, 17 April 2008 (UTC)

OK, I see where you're confused:

has transclusions to /January 2008 /February 2008, etc. The full files to edit would be:
 * User:Tony1/Monthly updates of styleguide and policy changes

etc. Just append the transcluded file to the main file. Sandy Georgia (Talk) 16:55, 17 April 2008 (UTC)
 * User:Tony1/Monthly updates of styleguide and policy changes/January 2008
 * User:Tony1/Monthly updates of styleguide and policy changes/February 2008
 * Ok, I'm confused; isn't there supposed to be a period after the sentence fragment at Machievelli, then? FCDW/April 21, 2008 Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 06:01, 18 April 2008 (UTC)

Welcome
Just to say, welcome to the FA-Team! I'm glad you've signed up (and fixed a few dashes). Geometry guy 18:41, 17 April 2008 (UTC)

New MOSNUM policy to address more than just binary prefixes
Since you voted on a proposal to no longer routinely use the IEC prefixes (kibibytes & KiB), I thought you’d be interested to know that the best we could muster at this time is a more general principal here on MOSNUM. I’m sorry I couldn’t deliver anything better at the moment. However, I hope you will agree that it speaks to the basic principal underlying that whole debate. Greg L (talk) 03:27, 18 April 2008 (UTC)

Metric
Fine. I saw your position as being that idiom in Commonwealth English was always metric. I'm not sure I believe that, but you're a native speaker. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 16:06, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Murphy alone knows what FA reviewers will not do, if given an imperative to apply. I do mean four-minute mile, but I also mean the sentence in pound cake: A traditional American pound cake would specify one pound each of flour, butter, eggs, and sugar. (I see it needs recipe or contain, and will add one; it should be pound, however, whether we are indirectly quoting a recipe or talking about the cakes themselves.) Septentrionalis PMAnderson 16:19, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I was trying to preserve the existing parallellism. If I were writing from scratch, I would say something like: Do what is natural in this variety of English about this subject. and the rest would be examples (Metric is usually natural on the sciences; customary units often natural in American...) I will think about prefers, but that was a deliberate change to the addition: if there is a preference in the local variety of English, we should follow, even if there are 1% exceptions. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 16:34, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Actually, scientific articles in American (with field-specific exceptions) have metric as idiom; so there is in fact no cross-cutting. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 16:54, 18 April 2008 (UTC)

FAC
Tony, I commend your strive for good prose, but you often come across as very cold and bullish. Please do not take this comment as a personal attack, as it's certainly not meant to be one. When I comment on someone's work at GA or FAC I attempt to be polite and identify some of the positives. After hours upon hours of work, it's really upsetting to receive only negativity. I often adopt the sandwich approach in my (real-world) teaching, for example. The GA process has some useful comments: Reviewing_good_articles.

Since you have the skills, I wonder if you would be so charitable to 'massage' the prose yourself? Ultimately that will improve the article, which is our mutual desire. Thank you in advance. The JPS talk to me  17:24, 18 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your quick reply. As I say, i do appreciate your work. (I could have so easily omitted that comment, but it fits in with WP:TEA.) I have certainly seen some tripe on my time: I spend many hours deleting some of it. It would be counterproductive, though, to apply this label the odd typo or misplaced semicolon in a piece of work someone has worked on in good faith (Joking Apart, my current, and perhaps final FAC, I strongly believe is far from tripe, although professional copyeditors will spot issues that most readers will not). It's fine to encourage people to improve their skills... but how to encourage effectively...? The 'that's wrong, stupid' approach is more likely to discourage people from the project altogether. I think one of the strengths of Wikipedia is that it can improve writing skills (it has improved mine... although I guess you're wondering what the hell I was like before...), but, for many, this is an unconscious goal. The JPS talk to me  18:03, 18 April 2008 (UTC)

Easy Jet
Hey, Tony; Ealdgyth has given hours and hours of her time to FAC. Easy Jet is nice, short article; I wonder if you have time to run through it for her pre-FAC? Best, Sandy Georgia (Talk) 04:34, 19 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Thank you, very very much for the comments. Believe me I'll be working on them, although one is going to have to wait until I get home and can double check the sources before I can take one of your suggestions. Again, thank you. And thanks for not totally ripping my pitiful prose to shreds! Ealdgyth - Talk 15:15, 19 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Yep, Vegas. Haven't lost a penny yet. (Of course, I've been too busy with the horse show to actually bet). Thanks again! Ealdgyth - Talk 01:35, 20 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Am home and double checked on the All American Futurity winners and Champions issue, and turns out that one AAF winner wasn't named a champion (very odd, I must admit). Otherwise, I took most of your suggestions. Thanks SOOO much for the copyedit, I very much appreciate it. Ealdgyth - Talk 04:09, 22 April 2008 (UTC)

1995 Japanese Grand Prix
I notice you've been commenting on the discussion I started at WT:FAC. I was wondering whether you could possibly look at the article, and write comments on the talkpage, specifically noting if there are any major MoS breaches. Thanks, D.M.N. (talk) 13:09, 19 April 2008 (UTC)

The Third of May 1808
Tony, can you revisit this FAC. You expressed concern re prose in an edit summary, but there has been a lot of work since. Ceoil (talk) 11:19, 20 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, editors like Noetica are always great to find, and are hugely appreciated and valued. A sad fact is that most of us just can not wright, propely. Ceoil (talk) 12:29, 20 April 2008 (UTC)

FAC revisits
Tony, when you have a chance, can you revisit Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Halo: Contact Harvest and Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Getting It: The psychology of est. Sandy Georgia (Talk) 20:24, 20 April 2008 (UTC)

Using policy pages as scratchpads
The stuff that is going on at wp:mosnum bothers me. Surely policies should only go live when reasonably well formed and agreed. At least I thought that was what we required of other editors. What are your thoughts on this? Lightmouse (talk) 23:04, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I agree, LM. Tony   (talk)  02:31, 22 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Thanks. I tried to do something but it had no effect. Lightmouse (talk) 00:58, 23 April 2008 (UTC)

Michael Jackson
Hi there, ive taken care of your issues at the FA. Feel free to add more or strick down as resolved. Cheers. Realist 2 ( 'Come Speak To Me' ) 23:35, 21 April 2008 (UTC)

Particulary greatful for your advise on the lead, it actually looks a lot better now. Yours  Realist 2  ( 'Come Speak To Me' ) 23:36, 21 April 2008 (UTC)

TOClimit
Well, I didn't create the template, and I haven't actually added it to any articles. But my understanding is, it's intended so you can organize the page into many levels of editable sections, without cluttering the TOC box. Superm401 - Talk 03:18, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I see the point in its existence, because it can be used in non-article space, and I'm not sure it should never be used in articles, but FAs should have clean, well-organized TOCs, per crit. 2b, so maybe it's a matter for WP:WIAFA. Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 04:06, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Was your point about the two examples you provided that the TOC (in full mode) is out of control? I thought it was not too bad, but on the boundary. Tony   (talk)  09:56, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Parts of it (External links and one or two sections). I look at the TOC to get an overview of how the article is organized, what topics it covers (comprehensive), if the structure makes sense, if it's too choppy, etc.  Bothers me that info is hidden.  Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 17:46, 22 April 2008 (UTC)
 * So perhaps the answer is to insist in the instructions that the TOC be displayed in full during a nomination period? Tony   (talk)  05:40, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure. For starters, it's unclear what the original intent of 2b was.  What is clear is that hiding the TOC can camouflage article issues, so that reviewers might not engage.  I don't know how other reviewers operate, but when I was reviewing, since it's not possible to thoroughly review every article, I had a series of things I looked at in deciding whether to engage in a fuller review, or to pass by that FAC.  A convoluted or uncomprehensive TOC was one of the first things I looked at in deciding whether to engage in a full review.  So at minimum, it troubles me that reviewers might not realize, at first glance, the full structure of the article.  Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 05:46, 23 April 2008 (UTC)

WT:MoS archives
Tony, I take it from undefined ...that MiszaBot is about to spring into action. Does 20 days still seem about right? We're up to 428K, and at 20 days, it could easily have been twice that. - Dan Dank55 (talk)(mistakes) 13:23, 22 April 2008 (UTC)

Featured article candidates/Flag of Canada
Could you take a second look please? Cheers Gary King ( talk )  20:07, 22 April 2008 (UTC)

Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Halo: Contact Harvest
I've responded to your concerns at the FAC page. -- Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk ) 23:20, 22 April 2008 (UTC)

Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Getting It: The psychology of est
If you say you 'won't oppose' - can you please cross out your 'oppose' comment from above in the FAC? Thank you for revisiting. Cirt (talk) 14:04, 23 April 2008 (UTC)

I'm curious
Are you just going to complain about every new FL promotion or are you actually going to do something helpful like review lists while they are FLCs? -- Scorpion0422 16:59, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
 * See my post at FLC, and moderate your hysterical reaction. For everyone else who's interested in maintaining acceptable standards of featured content on WP, please see the unpleasant debacle unfolding HERE, and the issues I've raised about the chaotic state of the FL Criteria above that section. Tony   (talk)  17:16, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Do excuse me, Scorpion, but from what I saw Tony thought that the list had already been promoted, and he has given you the reason for this as well. How could he review a promoted list? Waltham, The Duke of 17:14, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
 * You actually seem to have missed my point. Tony1 has been complaining about lists for several days (not just the Apple one), so I am wondering why he doesn't just review them before they are promoted. -- Scorpion0422 17:23, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
 * No, you miss the point, Scorpion; I'm concerned about the standards of promoted lists at the moment, and the running of the promotions process. I've already questioned how a process can be anything but chaotic with the criteria as they are—especially Criterion 1. But the rot seems to have penetrated deeper than just the criteria. Tony   (talk)  17:38, 23 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Scorpion, a successful system is one which can run effectively despite the changes in its staffing; good editors and reviewers are certainly required, but the departure of some motivators should not be able to bring the process down on its own. Therefore, it is not Tony's joining FLC or not that should make a significant improvement. It is the adjustment of the process which should ensure a smooth running of FLC at all times what really matters. Waltham, The Duke of 18:31, 23 April 2008 (UTC)

Copyediting request
Could you please take a look at the prose at the following FACs:


 * Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess
 * Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time

Thanks! Gary King ( talk ) 19:35, 23 April 2008 (UTC)

Thanks, Gary. I'll review them, but I don't copy-edit—too close to my RL job. Tony  (talk)  02:28, 24 April 2008 (UTC)

Bouncing gifs
Hi Tony, I've not been editing much lately and just saw your note about the bouncing icon. I'm assuming the issue has been settled, but if it hasn't, please let me know and I'll take a look. My apologies for the delay. SlimVirgin talk| edits 06:51, 24 April 2008 (UTC)

Wording advice
Tony, you seem to be a master of wording here. I'm looking at the section on Edgar Allan Poe's death: The precise cause of Poe's death remains a mystery.[64] Newspapers at the time reported Poe's death as "congestion of the brain" or "cerebral inflammation", common euphemisms for deaths from disgraceful causes such as alcoholism.[65] Many theories have been suggested, including delirium tremens, heart disease, epilepsy and meningeal inflammation.[66] One of the most common beliefs is that Poe was a victim of cooping, first suggested as early as 1872.[67]

It seems to me that the line "Many theories have been suggested" seems weak, and also doesn't flow well from the previous statement about alcoholism. I feel it should say something about "suggested medical causes" or "theories on other medical causes" or something along those lines. Anything you'd suggest? --Midnightdreary (talk) 14:42, 24 April 2008 (UTC)

The sequence of ideas is a real problem. Maybe this? "Newspapers at the time reported Poe's death as 'congestion of the brain' or 'cerebral inflammation', common euphemisms for deaths from desreputable causes such as alcoholism.[65] However, the actual cause of death remains a mystery;[64] from as early as 1872, cooping was commonly believed to have been the cause,[67] and speculation has included delirium tremens, heart disease, epilepsy and meningeal inflammation.[66]"

Tony  (talk)  15:12, 24 April 2008 (UTC)


 * That works for me. Thanks for taking a look. If you see anything else in need of a tweaking, let me know! --Midnightdreary (talk) 17:02, 25 April 2008 (UTC)

Blue Heelers (season 13) FLC
Hello Tony1,

Thankyou for your comments about the Blue Heelers (season 13) (talk) (FLC page) list which is currently a featured list candidate. I have made all the changes you suggested and I hope you might return and give the list your consideration again as it has not garnered enough support votes and is soon due to finish.

I tried to find all the US/UK English spelling errors but was only able to find a few. I would appreciate it if you could have another look for some more spelling errors.

Thankyou, Daniel99091 (talk) 08:16, 25 April 2008 (UTC).


 * Wow, that's embarrassing... I'm quite sorry about that. I guess that's what you get when you're lazy and you copy a part of a message. The message was actually to you. Sorry, Daniel99091 (talk) 09:16, 25 April 2008 (UTC).

“Green section” on MOSNUM
Tony, the green-div section on MOSNUM regarding “follow current literature” is still a proposal. Various versions are shown on Talk:MOSNUM but the version actually on MOSNUM has a header statement that it is indeed a proposal and it invites discussion. Greg L (talk) 17:16, 25 April 2008 (UTC)

10 percent
If a sample shows one competitor at 10%, and ten at 9%, then it is very difficult (it requires a very large sample size and the sort of balanced, scientific surveys which would ensure the sample is not at all biased - Google does not qualify in any of its versions) to be sure that the whole universe of English does not have another competitor at 10% and the lucky competitor at 9% (or many other possibilities). This is a guideline; if a 40-30-30 split comes up we can deal with it by analogy. Analogy will cut both ways: there is a leader and there is almost a tie; it will be the task of editorial judgment to decide which is more compelling. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 17:28, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
 * But your wording is Where possible. If there is no majority, it is impossible to follow it, so that case is covered. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 17:38, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
 * OK. I'm not sure how many people will appreciate the last tweak, but in principle a does not assert existence. Septentrionalis PMAnderson 19:22, 25 April 2008 (UTC)

Dispatch update
Tony, see here, also, there's a nice post on my talk page about your MoS Dispatch. Are you available Sunday night, Monday morning to ce a Dispatch (not yet sure which)? Sandy Georgia (Talk) 20:05, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Only if you're interested: FCDW/April 28, 2008.  And, if you can add an image or do a screenshot ... :-))  Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 01:55, 26 April 2008 (UTC)

Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Getting It: The psychology of est again
Hi, Tony. There have been quite a few more comments at Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Getting It: The psychology of est. Have you had any thoughts of re-reviewing? Regards, Bishonen | talk 22:57, 25 April 2008 (UTC).

Revisit
Have you had a chance to revisit Featured article candidates/Parallel computing? Sandy Georgia (Talk) 00:08, 26 April 2008 (UTC)

Don't use this method
of objecting to the objectionable. He already had my mouth open at the series of reverts. Go to the talk page and say "It was a comment, a suggestion, and all you did was unsuggest - that's not a response." Shenme (talk) 12:33, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I don't have a POV. I was afraid that you'd garner a 3RR violation, especially after I looked and saw you had clean record. It freaks me out when I see people (over?) react at someone else's inappropriate response.
 * I happen to agree with you. Moreover, I can't believe they deleted the comment.  To me a comment is a note, and should be considered a note between editors. If there can be no 'between', no give-and-take, then there is 'ownership', yes?  And that's a bad thing.
 * And speaking of which (bad things), now you can see both how easy it is to get mad when someone does soemthing I would consider rude, and how that can spill over into seeing everyone as being rude/angry/against-you. Not everyone is against everyone! I'm was genuinely afraid for you! I mean, I was also thinking "It was just a comment - what was the problem with that?" Shenme (talk) 12:50, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I would very much rather I hadn't used the word "don't" - I was in a hurry (see above). I see people throw out the rules, and good sense, it seems everyday and that really depresses me (see above). And we're "all adults here", and yet haven't you seen people do the most amazingly bad things, and wish you'd been able to say "wait, take a moment - that ain't worth it." I apologize for upsetting you further; I was hoping for otherwise. Shenme (talk) 13:07, 26 April 2008 (UTC)

Follow current literature
Tony1, you recent edits seem rather minor to me. Does that mean you are in basic agreement with its message point? Greg L (talk) 18:24, 26 April 2008 (UTC)

By the way, I took your hidden editors comment under advisement and removed the entire bit about the uno. This also addressed a concern of Thunderbird1’s as he felt the IEC prefixes were unjustifiably tarred and feathered with the totally failed uno. Cheers. Greg L (talk) 18:50, 26 April 2008 (UTC)

P.S. Please pardon my edit summary comment in which I referred to your hidden editors comment as a "petty snipe”. I thought that had been put there by the same editor (Lightmouse), who had deleted the whole green-div section. Greg L (talk) 19:15, 26 April 2008 (UTC)

Blue Heelers (season 13)
Hello Tony,

I have carried out all the things you suggested at the FLC page and have had another go at copyediting and proofing the intro and list as a whole. Could you possibly have a quick look at how I've done? I'm a self-confessed bad copy-editor.

Thanks, Daniel99091 (talk) 01:22, 27 April 2008 (UTC).

P.S. I also got your name right this time!

Size of Manual of Style
After looking at Manual of Style, it seems to me that it's way too big. Would it be possible to make the page into a list of sorts and branch out to separate articles that each deal with a separate issue, rather than having all of that information on one page? It just seems too daunting for most people to bother sifting through (the list on the right side is great for navigation; the table of contents is not). Also, it'd probably make it easier for discussions, cleanups, etc. because I've spot a few cleanup templates on the page, which doesn't bode well considering it's a MOS page so it holds some very significant importance. This is obviously asking a lot, but I'd just like some opinion on it. I wouldn't be surprised if this has been debated endlessly already; if it has, then please let me know. Gary King ( talk ) 08:43, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
 * You mean like the German MOS (or is it the French)? I have to disagree: MOS is hard enough already to coordinate without further decentralising the information. Attracting a larger group of skilled people to the talk page is important—a critical mass. I don't find it hard to navigate through; what's hard about the ToC? MOS is, in fact, rather short for a styleguide. Tony   (talk)  08:48, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
 * I've never collaborated on the MOS before, so I don't know how many people usually hang around there. I'm mostly in articles; I suppose it should be expected that Project namespace articles have much less activity compared to articles. Gary <b style="color:#02b;"><i style="font-size:large;">K</i>ing</b> ( talk )  09:05, 27 April 2008 (UTC)

FLC
Tony,

Firstly, thanks for your support. I'd seriously consider it if I had a spare hour every day. Secondly, I did manage to respond to your request about the 1a criteria. It is a bit of a wordy reply but I hope it explains how we got here. If you are still interested in improving the criteria, I'd be happy to work with you. It might be best to wait till the director stuff is complete, so the talk page isn't confused by two simultaneous conversations. Cheers, Colin°Talk 17:12, 27 April 2008 (UTC)

I think you need to read this page Three-revert rule
I think you need to read this page Three-revert rule as it relates to your multiple reverts on WP:MOSNUM because it says "An editor must not perform more than three reverts, in whole or in part, on a single page within a 24-hour period. A revert means undoing the actions of another editor, whether involving the same or different material each time." Fnagaton 18:09, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
 * No, I certainly don't need to read that page; I can count to three. Can't you? Get off my talk page: you are NOT WELCOME HERE. Tony   (talk)  18:16, 27 April 2008 (UTC)