User talk:TonyPaki

Concerning you recent edit on Noor Jehan
You added a paragraph under the Jehan as a play back singer section of the article, which does not have a NPOV. It seems more like a fan's comment and is not encyclopaedic. The article should have information about Jehan which allows the reader to understand that Jehan was one of Pakistan very well know singers. Text saying that she was the best Pakistani singer reflects your point of you and shouldn't be included in articles. When editing Jehan try to provide facts rather than your point of view about her and if you want to really say something nice about her then just tone down the language. :) I hope you don't mind me saying this. SholeemGriffin (talk) 07:55, 21 July 2008 (UTC)