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Rose Pesotta
Hi Tonybruin94. In your contributions to the Rose Pesotta page, please avoid adjectives that are unnecessary and seem to violate Wikipedia's guidelines on Neutral Point of View (NPOV). No need to say she was "courageous," for instance just describe what she did. Just read through and ask whether you need all these modifiers. Economy of language is at a premium on Wikipedia. Also, as you move this out of the sandbox, take care not to overwhelm the existing article with new material. Toby Higbie (talk) 07:06, 15 December 2014 (UTC)