User talk:Tonyperezsantamonica

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Hello, Tonyperezsantamonica, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your messages on discussion pages using four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place  before the question. Again, welcome! J Milburn (talk) 22:18, 12 January 2011 (UTC)
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Messages from IRC
I left you these comments on IRC, but you didn't reply, so I'm posting them here too. The book sources seem OK, but there are still some problems with the article. However, there are some major issues. The best thing to do right now would be to update the page to that it uses inline citations. You can find instructions of how to do that here. At the moment, the quotes and facts appear to be uncited because the sources are merely listed at the bottom. Another major problem with the article is the tone. Wikipedia articles need to be written from the neutral point of view; phrases like "He was the ultimate behind-the-scenes player." are adding nothing, and make the article seem like it is written in support of the subject. There are also formatting issues, but they can be worked on later. However, the article is not going to be accepted until it is more carefully cited, and neutral in tone. Thanks. If you need to contact me, you can reach me on my talk page. J Milburn (talk) 22:18, 12 January 2011 (UTC)