User talk:Too much tv time/sandbox

Can you look at my first article and suggest changes?
 * Hi there. Most editors who answer help me requests aren't looking to take the time to do article reviews. If you're looking to get an article in your sandbox reviewed, we have the Articles for creation process.  You can submit your article to be reviewed by an AfC reviewer by adding  to the top of the sandbox page. &mdash;Darkwind (talk) 18:53, 13 November 2013 (UTC)