User talk:Torchiest/Archive 7

Drowned God
You didn't miscalculate; I made a miscalculation. Because of that, you have expanded a little bit. Therefore, maybe it would be recommended that you need another reviewer. Nevertheless, if possible, I might have enough time to review all the references if all is settled and done with. --George Ho (talk) 13:43, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

July drive
Hi Torchiest. The drive discussion seems to have slowed down, though I don't think it has really bottomed out all questions. I'm thinking of starting a new section tomorrow, summarising on the basis that I suspect that the latest statements not to have been challenged may represent a consensus, and inviting everyone to express any differing views. If that goes well, I can then create the drive page on Wednesday (20th). Are you happy with that plan? Are there any issues you'd like addressed before we do that? I've also asked Allen and Dianna. Cheers, Simon. --Stfg (talk) 20:09, 17 June 2012 (UTC)

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Deathlasersonline
What should be done with his b0rked GANs? Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 17:53, 19 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Not sure. I already notified Wizardman, one of the coordinators, about the potential problems a few days ago, so he may pick them up if they drift into limbo. —Torchiest talkedits 17:57, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

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New drive signup method
Hi. That was a quick month! I took a quick look but probably need to spend a bit more time getting my mind round it, and RL is busy today. I'm not overlooking it, but it may be tomorrow or the next day before I can spend serious time with it. Best, --Stfg (talk) 10:05, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
 * No problem, and no hurry. Like I said, I only have the basic structure of it, with (most of) the technical details figured out, but I'm pretty sure there is a good amount of fine tuning that will be required. —Torchiest talkedits 13:35, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

Thanks. I've had a quick test drive just now. There seems to be a small bug in that the code doesn't fill in the username -- see the created version of the .../Stfg file. Anyway, that's a detail at the moment. Let me play back my understanding to you and you can correct it if I've misunderstood.

So: I enter my username Stfg in the box and click the button, and it creates a new file called Wikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors/Backlog elimination drives/month/Stfg. Then I paste into the Participants section the line that transcludes this file into the drive page itself. Thereafter, I list my articles by clicking "add articles to your list", which edits that file. Reviewers do the same thing to mark articles reviewed. People still need to go get their rollover words (although it doesn't matter if they don't, as I always go through and check/add those). This is just checking my understanding at the moment. How is it? Cheers, --Stfg (talk) 10:50, 30 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Yes, your understanding is correct. As for first part, it's not sure much a bug as just a feature that doesn't exist yet. :) I don't know if the button and can auto-fill that part on its own, since it's using the name you enter to create the page, which I think is about the limit of its powers.  But the instructions on the newly created page do say to fill in the name parameter yourself.  That was one of my questions: could the instructions be clearer, or more complete? —Torchiest talkedits 12:56, 30 June 2012 (UTC)


 * OK, then I'm missing the point a bit. Given that we have to paste something somewhere and gather our rollover words, need we do more than just paste   in the designated place and do the rollover words? This seems more complicated --Stfg (talk) 18:03, 30 June 2012 (UTC)


 * You're right. The original way it was put together was not very convenient.  I've made some more changes to it.  I need to do some fine tuning but the new way will actually make it worth using. —Torchiest talkedits 18:39, 30 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Looking great now. I replied in detail at my page, to thread with the specifics you raised there. Cheers, --Stfg (talk) 21:10, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

Dahn Yoga
I understand your position on the issue is due to being brainwashed into Dahn Yoga. But this does not mean you can use Wikipedia to advertise anything that has not been proven.

And please refer to under which "talk page consensus" did you revert the edit back.

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 * For my future reference, the rest of the conversation is here. —Torchiest talkedits 15:51, 29 June 2012 (UTC)

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A barnstar for you!
Thanks, and you're welcome! It's always good to share any tricks you find. —Torchiest</B> talk<sub style="margin-left:-3ex;">edits 12:27, 29 June 2012 (UTC)

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A barnstar for you!
Thanks, I really appreciate it! I'll be back in August. <B>—Torchiest</B> talk<sub style="margin-left:-3ex;">edits 23:13, 2 July 2012 (UTC)

DYK for Twine (band)
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Re: Track listing
I noticed you added a couple of track listings to the Abney Park page (which I regularly keep an eye on for vandalism). I hadn't seen that before on a page, but seeing that you're a fairly established editor I'm assuming it's legit and just something new? Is there a page in the style guide on it? Thanks for your help with the page. --Jonnybgoode44 (talk) 22:38, 4 July 2012 (UTC)
 * I started redirecting the individual albums to the main band article, because each one is just a track list, but I didn't want to lose the information, so I was adding them into the main article as I went. I'm not 100% on the way I'm doing it yet though.  I started a discussion on it here, and I'd be interested in your thoughts on it.  Of course, if more information can be added to the individual albums, they can be split back out and sourced.  Mainly what I'm doing is going through a list of ~400 unsourced industrial music articles, and trying to fix them, either by adding sources, redirecting/merging, or deleting. <B>—Torchiest</B> talk<sub style="margin-left:-3ex;">edits 22:43, 4 July 2012 (UTC)

Selena albums discography
Hello, thanks for copy-editing the article however, your edits are not the style guidelines for discographies. Can you please look at FL discography such as Mariah Carey albums discography and compare? Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  00:33, 6 July 2012 (UTC)
 * I removed the section headers again. Is that what you had in mind, or was there something else? <B>—Torchiest</B> talk<sub style="margin-left:-3ex;">edits 00:48, 6 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Ok its looking good, however, according to WP:LEAD there should only be a max of 4 paragraphs there's like 7. Can you trim what shouldn't be there? Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  00:51, 6 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Ok, I combined them back down. Sorry for that; I wasn't aware that featured lists had those restrictions. <B>—Torchiest</B> talk<sub style="margin-left:-3ex;">edits 01:01, 6 July 2012 (UTC)

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DYK nomination of Inscape (publisher)
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History of WRPGs
Could you please properly close the discussion for http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:History_of_Western_role-playing_video_games/GA1? I don't know how to do it. I think it needs to be put in a box with a green background or something. Thanks. SharkD  Talk  01:22, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
 * I don't think anything else needs to be done to the review page. Normally, they're just left like that, without any boxes or extra formatting.  Check here to see all the other GA reviews are not closed beyond what the WRPG history looks like. <B>—Torchiest</B> talk<sub style="margin-left:-3ex;">edits 01:35, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
 * I meant like this one, but I guess they're not necessary. Thanks! SharkD   Talk  02:11, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

July 2012 barnstar
Thanks! And don't worry, it wasn't an obvious target at first. <B>—Torchiest</B> talk<sub style="margin-left:-3ex;">edits 11:37, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

Copyediting
Hello Torchiest ,I have tentatively started copyediting and contributed to Almatti Dam and Tyagi articles.As you are a coordinator of the drive ,I thought it would be fair to inform you about it.So that you can check it and point out the mistakes i might have made.I would like to improve and further contribute if i am good enough. Thank YouAyanosh (talk) 07:21, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * I took a look at Almatti Dam and made some more changes to it. Some of the things you changed were okay as they were, and some need further or different changes.  I'll look over Tyagi a little later. <B>—Torchiest</B> talk<sub style="margin-left:-3ex;">edits 12:52, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * One simple thing with punctuation you'll need to watch out for: you want to have a space after the punctuation mark, not before. For example:
 * {|style="background:transparent"


 * -valign=top
 * Incorrect:          ||Smith ,Jones ,and Brown went to the store.They purchased some supplies while there.
 * -valign=top
 * Correct:  ||Smith, Jones, and Brown went to the store. They purchased some supplies while there.
 * }
 * I would also suggest reading as much as you can of WP:MOS, which explains almost everything you will need to copy edit articles. <B>—Torchiest</B> talk<sub style="margin-left:-3ex;">edits 16:21, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Thank You for responding to my request and for the suggestions given.Presently I am working on V. P. Sathyan.Ayanosh (talk) 05:12, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

DYK for Inscape (publisher)
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DYK for Drowned God: Conspiracy of the Ages
Graeme Bartlett (talk) 00:02, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

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Re: Shenmue
Six still seems really high. I see the box art, "Culture" screenshot, quick-time screenshot and maybe the Saturn screenshot passing WP:NFCC. The rest are just fluff. --Teancum (talk)

Speedy deletion nomination of Cheryl Wilson


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Your GA nomination of Drowned God: Conspiracy of the Ages
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put it on hold. For comments, please click here. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. Rp0211 ( talk2me ) 19:10, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
 * All issues have been addressed, so I passed the article. Congratulations and keep up the good work!  Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 20:02, 15 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Excellent. Thank you! <B>—Torchiest</B> talk<sub style="margin-left:-3ex;">edits 20:02, 15 July 2012 (UTC)