User talk:Torpedonista78

Your submission at Articles for creation: C2H4® (September 2)
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Lapablo (talk) 09:11, 2 September 2020 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:C2H4®


A tag has been placed on Draft:C2H4®, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the. Lapablo (talk) 09:12, 2 September 2020 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, Torpedonista78, and welcome to Wikipedia!&#32;Thank you for your contributions.

I noticed that one of the first articles you edited appears to be dealing with a topic with which you may have a conflict of interest. In other words, you may find it difficult to write about that topic in a neutral and objective way, because you are, work for, or represent, the subject of that article.&#32;Your recent contributions may have already been undone for this very reason.

To reduce the chances of your contributions being undone, you might like to draft your revised article before submission, and then ask me or another editor to proofread it. See our help page on userspace drafts for more details. If the page you created has already been deleted from Wikipedia, but you want to save the content from it to use for that draft, don't hesitate to ask anyone from this list and they will copy it to your user page.

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Thanks - Proofread
Torpedonista78 (talk) 13:56, 2 September 2020 (UTC) Thanks for your in depth reply Torpedonista78 (talk) 13:56, 2 September 2020 (UTC)

Just to clarify, I'm not affiliated with the company. I do have a connection with them but I am not paid, employed or part of them. I used A.P.C. as a base for the article and tried to be as objective as possible. Can you proof read this draft and highlight what exactly needs to change to approve of this? I have referenced what I can with independent and verifiable sources. Thanks again for your help.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Torpedonista78/sandbox/c2h4
 * To have your draft checked, please edit it and add {{subst:submit}}, which will submit it for review by experienced editors. If you want more help, change the help me-helped back into a help me, stop by the Teahouse, or Wikipedia's live help channel, or the help desk to ask someone for assistance. Primefac (talk) 14:58, 2 September 2020 (UTC)


 * Even if you have no paid connection, you should declare your conflict of interest on the article talk page. I've removed the (R) symbols, opinions and similar, but the text is still basically "this is what we sell". The company appears to have no employees, turnover or profits, and no sales figures. Not clear why it meets The notability guidelines for organisations and companies. The primary criteria has five components that must be evaluated separately and independently to determine if it is met:
 * significant coverage in
 * independent,
 * multiple,
 * reliable,
 * secondary sources.
 * Note that an individual source must meet all four criteria to be counted towards notability.


 * Note that sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the company, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the company claims or interviewing him its management. Jimfbleak - talk to me?  15:50, 2 September 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: c2h4 (September 2)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Theroadislong were:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to User:Torpedonista78/sandbox/c2h4 and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to User:Torpedonista78/sandbox/c2h4, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "Db-g7" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
 * If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Theroadislong (talk) 15:00, 2 September 2020 (UTC)

Torpedonista78 (talk) 15:36, 2 September 2020 (UTC)

Thanks. I have edited the text with an attempt to be as factual and neutral as possible. How come pages like this can exist? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/A.P.C.

New version: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Torpedonista78/sandbox/c2h4
 * The article A.P.C. also reads like an advert and I have tagged it as such, see other poor quality articles exist. Theroadislong (talk) 15:40, 2 September 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: c2h4 (September 2)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to User:Torpedonista78/sandbox/c2h4 and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to User:Torpedonista78/sandbox/c2h4, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "Db-g7" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
 * If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Robert McClenon (talk) 17:27, 2 September 2020 (UTC)

Nomination of Yixi Chen for deletion
A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Yixi Chen is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Articles for deletion/Yixi Chen until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article.  DGG ( talk ) 01:00, 4 September 2020 (UTC)

September 2020
You have been blocked indefinitely from editing for advertising or promotion. From your contributions, this seems to be your only purpose. If you think there are good reasons for being unblocked, please read the guide to appealing blocks, then add the following text below the block notice on your talk page:. MER-C 14:16, 5 September 2020 (UTC)