User talk:Torsagirl19/sandbox

Juliett 1026 (talk) 16:58, 27 January 2016 (UTC)

Editing suggestions
Hi just leaving some editing suggestions. Hope this was helpful EPInfiniti (talk) 23:18, 20 January 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) The infobox for The One Summer isn't formatted correctly
 * 2) Maybe you should add a description for The One Summer?
 * 3) In the infobox for My Friend Rabbit it might be a good idea to remove the "preceded by" and "followed by"
 * 4) The section for the TV Series should probably be a separate article that you can just link to

For your "Little Red Riding Hood" stub you should rewrite this sentence: " it is basically retelling the "Red Riding Hood" of the Brothers Grimm version " maybe say The story is a retelling of the original Grimm brothers' "red riding hood"

--Indighostly (talk) 16:09, 27 January 2016 (UTC)

This One Summer Rose has been coming to a cottage in Awago every summer and meets her summer friend, after every summer put to meet her friend windy. and is the narrator of the story... Put And she is .... — Preceding unsigned comment added by Juliett 1026 (talk • contribs) 16:45, 27 January 2016 (UTC)

Juliett 1026 (talk) 16:57, 27 January 2016 (UTC)

An unnamed little boy imagines "Rapunzel" that is "just a house for Me ME". ?????? what did i just read -__- the house including a special bed, special shelf, special chairs, a special door, special walls, and a special table. i think you like the word special too much lol. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Juliett 1026 (talk • contribs) 16:56, 27 January 2016 (UTC) Juliett 1026 (talk) 16:58, 27 January 2016 (UTC)