User talk:Tosel978/sandbox

Hi guys,

Your IRAC scenario is great. Only comment I would have is to create the subsection with clear headings to break up the page a little bit more. Also try to format your neutral voice in a paragraph form more so than individual sentences. For example. headings would be, IRAC Scenario, Neutral Voice, Sources/References.

All the best, Mitch ProjectBillion4theWin (talk) 11:59, 4 April 2020 (UTC)

Hi Team PalmUp,

Just a recommendation, maybe you can rearrange the last 4 paragraphs so that it flows nicely and is concise. Also, I do not think you need to list all the sources since you already cited & linked it to your sentences. Msel20 (talk) 11:59, 4 April 2020 (UTC)

Hi Team PalmUp,

Good job with the IRAC Scenario and love how you are thinking of a design patent. I would perhaps explain a little more about what exactly they are infringing on, maybe that could come with a description of why PalmUp's design is so special. I also agree with Mitch that adding clear headings would make it a little more organized.

Keep up the good work!

Cheers, Victoria Almeida Thought&#38;Action (talk) 20:31, 5 April 2020 (UTC)