User talk:TourBus2020

Hi TourBus2020! I just finished reading all of your long exchange with Jytdog on Christianity and Violence. I am also attempting to edit this extremely biased article and running into the same wall. I have been told my edit wasn't referenced properly, but that was wrong, then I was told it sounded too much like an essay and presented an argument. I didn't bother to point out places where the article presents arguments, I have just asked how one takes a work like H.A.Drake's "Intolerance and Christianity"-- that makes an argument-- summarize it accurately--and not have it sound like what the author said while still representing it faithfully???? What words should I be careful to use? I ask that sincerely. I am new here and I thought I was doing exactly what he and Wiki both say I should do. I thought everything you said in your discussion was right. His objections seem vague and not very helpful. So far for me it's been like trying to nail down egg white. Good luck! Jenhawk777 (talk) 20:33, 22 June 2017 (UTC)