User talk:Tovarfederica/sandbox

Peer Review

Do you have a picture of this mural? Because it's almost impossible to understand what you're talking about without seeing it. Also consider consolidating the features of the mural into a table or some sort and include the portion of the image you are talking about. What makes this mural important? How does it relate to the larger themes of the class? Maybe include more discussion of the mural's impact at USC or if some famous person has commented on it or potentially if it appears in a movie/pop culture. Also consider adding links in-text for all of the references you make, like when you talk about Judy Baca, link to her Wikipedia page. However, I think you do a good job of keeping a non-biased tone throughout and this definitely has a lot of potential!

Rachel Glait Response to Peer Review:
Yes! We will be adding a complete photo of the mural along with detailed photographs of each section to which we refer. We will not discuss the mural's significance to the class on the Wikipedia (as it is a bit irrelevant to this informational page). However, we will be discussing its significance in a borderlands context during our final presentation. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.181.88.12 (talk) 20:37, 30 March 2018 (UTC)

Federica Tovar Peer Review Response
Thanks for your review!

Yes, we've added links and a picture of the mural as well as of the separate sections we discuss in the article. We've also added more detail to the mural's connection to USC. Tovarfederica (talk) 19:11, 14 April 2018 (UTC)