User talk:Tovarg/Planetary-atmos-sandbox

Ice-albedo feedback peer review (Rudy)

 * Reading the article makes me wonder if the ice-albedo feedback is a runaway effect, can snowball earth be seen as runaway in one direction, in the other direction does all the ice on the planet melt?
 * Is there a citation for inducing earthquakes via post-glacial rebound
 * What are the effects of the sea warming due to ice retreat?
 * Are the sea level rises expected pertinent to human life, or are we talking more like centimeters?

Lede

 * Move up the "Ice is very reflective...leading to more warning" to right after the first sentence. This would probably lead better into the global climate change sentence.
 * The "The change in albedo acts to reinforce...leading to more cooling"

Evidence

 * "regional warming in" could change to "regional warming due to"
 * maybe also write "[Because of this] the cryosphere is"
 * "it can also potentially induce[s]" no need for the s
 * What is a slushy snowball?