User talk:Tpmsfcstudent2019/sandbox

After scanning through the article, I found that it is not qualifiable to be considered a credible article on Wikipedia. There are some suggestions and corrections I'm willing to make to improve it. One addition I will make is I will draw accurate information from a list of credible articles which will be used to backup why media in Paraguay is important and how it has transformed the transfer within the country as a whole. Another suggestion I have to improve this article is the author of it should do some more research on the topic, develop thesis statements, and use accurate evidence to prove the success and continued evolution of media in Paraguay and why it should be given more attention that what it is currently receiving. Overall, I think this article can be better as long as me, the author, and the other people who will be editing this page can work well together. Tpmsfcstudent2019 (talk) 15:09, 5 October 2016 (UTC)Thomas McGuigan