User talk:Tpsfc/sandbox

I think this is a good start to your article. It introduces some aspects of Jim Henson Television and these aspects are well known. It would be a good idea to perhaps add images to the article, such as images of the characters from Sesame Street since the "Jim Henson Television" article does not have any images, or much information but I think your contribution will definitely improve it. This information is intriguing, comprehensible, and contains neutral content. The sources are also relevant and reliable to the content but can be elaborated more on. The article could also use some spelling and grammar corrections. I enjoyed reading this article and look forward to your future edits! Emsroldan

Tyler: I like what you've done to the page so far. What sources are you using, since I don't see any cited on the page? Also, I agree with Emily that you could work on the spelling and grammar and possibly add some image. Please see the Wikipedia editing guide I handed out a while for info on how to add images and copyright considerations for doing so. If you are able, look to see if you can find some additional resources to use in order to add more content to the page. By the end of the semester, the goal is to have close to 500 words added to your live article. Please let me know if you need any help with it! Best, Prof.bgreg (talk) 20:15, 28 October 2016 (UTC)