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Jasmine: "Topic is clear and relates. Slight concern it will center too much on black males...with black women not as the central subject make sure to bridge how black feminist thought helps to examine, critically analyze, or combat this Complex. Lead paragraph is straight forward and sections are in a sensible order. I would suggest incorporating a specific section that relates it to the work of black feminists, however you best see this fit. Check out Oparah's piece again! Has to do with the university/prison industrial complex. Morgan's piece also has various examples of this in action (like Mothers ROC and their activism to protect their sons against the criminal justice system). Maybe you could find some "current" events in here, or since these are older examples, you could use them to demonstrate how this social issue has always existed even before the word was termed. Intriguing topic, I will definitely be looking back to read this when you finish."

I appreciate you bringing up the relation to Oparah and Morgan's pieces. Rios himself has offered criticism of how his work centers on men, and after taking his class last quarter I was introduced to works that he felt expanded on his concept while taking into account women's experiences and particularly the experiences of young girls of color / Black girls. I will be incorporating as much work into this as possible in order to give a wide view of what Rios is talking about; he did conceptualize the term, but obviously this issue is something that already exists and can be expanded upon. Tr5689872 (talk) 21:56, 29 April 2018 (UTC)

Jasmine's Peer Review: Topic is clear and relates. Slight concern it will center too much on black males...with black women not as the central subject make sure to bridge how black feminist thought helps to examine, critically analyze, or combat this Complex. Lead paragraph is straight forward and sections are in a sensible order. I would suggest incorporating a specific section that relates it to the work of black feminists, however you best see this fit. Check out Oparah's piece again! Has to do with the university/prison industrial complex. Morgan's piece also has various examples of this in action (like Mothers ROC and their activism to protect their sons against the criminal justice system). Maybe you could find some "current" events in here, or since these are older examples, you could use them to demonstrate how this social issue has always existed even before the word was termed. Intriguing topic, I will definitely be looking back to read this when you finish.

Melissa Cornwell's Peer Review: This is a great topic choice because there is so much current research to consider. Check out Michelle Alexander's book, The New Jim Crow, for her discussion of the school-to-prison pipeline. I agree with Jasmine's comment about remembering to focus on the black female intersectional experience, consider ways in which the youth experience of incarceration differs depending on biological sex as well as gender identity. What does Black feminist thought say about the criminalization of gender? Your overall organization is coming along nicely and I look forward to reading your finished product. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tr5689872 (talk • contribs) 22:39, 29 April 2018 (UTC)