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I'm writing the article now
It hasn't been used in any articles yet, but I'm drafting one called Lloyd A. Jeffress that still needs work before I submit it. Thank you for clarifying.

TracieBurns (talk) 21:33, 7 June 2016 (UTC)TracieBurns

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lloyd A. Jeffress (June 27)
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LaMona (talk) 21:08, 27 June 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lloyd A. Jeffress (June 28)
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LaMona (talk) 21:14, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Lloyd A. Jeffress has been accepted
 Lloyd A. Jeffress, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! SwisterTwister  talk  05:25, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
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Suggestion for your article
I saw your new article—nice work! I'd be proud as a lion on the moon if I wrote that. Now, a couple suggestions if I may: Ordinarily, the titles of works (including journals) are written out in full in citations using title case, so: "Journal of Comparative and Physiological Psychology" instead of "J COMP PHYSIOL PSYCH." In my opinion, it makes citations a lot easier to glance over. (You can even wikilink these if they have corresponding articles, as the Journal of Comparative and Physiological Psychology does.) It may also help make your citations and bibliographic entries look more consistent if you used the citation templates cite journal, cite book, and friends instead of hard-coding it yourself. Either way, congrats. Rebb ing  04:17, 8 July 2016 (UTC)


 * Thank you very much! I definitely understand your point, and will be happy to make those changes when I finish hearing from the scientists who are (not incorrectly) nit-picking my Jeffress Model explanation. Q: Why is there a : after the TracieBurns (talk) 04:28, 8 July 2016 (UTC)TracieBurns


 * Of course—they're not urgent. I'm glad you've got capable people looking over the scientific stuff.


 * Putting a colon in front of a wikilink disables what are called "backlinks": on any page on Wikipedia, you can click "What links here" on the left-hand side navigation panel and get a listing of pages that link to the current page. Disabling backlinking on a link keeps it from showing up in that list. It should never be done in articles, but a minority of editors use it on talk pages to keep irrelevant mentions from cluttering that view. The colon trick also disables categories and images: if I wanted to mention Category:Living people without adding this page to it, I'd use it; similarly, it keeps an image link for showing the image.


 * I'm honestly not sure why SwisterTwister rated the article like he did. But I did see a lot of referencing issues my second time through:
 * The McFadden, Young & McKinney piece is a key source for much of the article, but, as it's written by his former colleagues and not published, it's not a reliable source.
 * Some of the material isn't referenced at all; and many of the end-of-paragraph citations you've put in don't actually support everything in the paragraph.
 * While picking out page numbers for some of the citations to the McFadden piece, I noticed some material had been lifted out of it verbatim and even more was borrowed with only minimal paraphrasing. As in academia, plagiarism is heavily frowned upon on Wikipedia. ;)
 * It appears there's some original research and "synthesis" happening. On Wikipedia, every factual statement is supposed to be supported by a reliable source, and—critically—every conclusion we draw must have been made by a reliable source.
 * That should give you something to work on. I know it sounds like a lot, but please don't give up. If you wouldn't mind telling me, I'm curious what promoted you to write this: it clearly took some time. Rebb  ing  05:32, 8 July 2016 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the input and the education!
 * The short answer on why I wrote it is that I grew up with these guys - Lloyd, Linus, etc. My maiden name is McFadden. And I thought it was terrible that there was some discussion of the Jeffress model in a few articles in WP, and of course Linus mentions him, but nobody had written an article about all the contributions he made to neuroscience - and to mine hunting, which I thought was so cool but is so hard to find information about because the Navy does tend to keep secrets. So, essentially, this was a Father's Day gift to my dad that ran quite amok. There is probably synthesis, but there is certainly no original research in here. Can you point out areas in particular that you feel might be (gasp) original?


 * I assure you, I had no intent to plagiarize and certainly want to steer clear of any suggestion thereof. I have made and combined a lot of notes, and may have rewritten back to how it was written originally, which is annoying, but certainly fixable. After all, he did teach me to write! It's really kind of frightening how that happens with him and me. And sometimes, there's just no other clear way to say something. But, I will go through again and make sure there are quotations where they need to be.


 * Now here's a question: Because the McFadden, Young & McKinney memorial was adopted by the University and is published online, that isn't enough to constitute being published? It needs to have been in print somewhere else? There is another version published in a journal, but Dad didn't have a copy and I didn't want to pay $12 to get the PDF, but if that would improve the rating . . ..


 * Again, all your help and feedback is tremendously appreciated. TracieBurns (talk) 18:04, 8 July 2016 (UTC)

Sorry for the late response: I bookmarked this but forgot until today. I think this was an absolutely lovely (and large) gift.

By "original research," I meant there were instances where the article draws conclusions not explicitly made by the sources—a natural and ordinarily useful habit. An example would be the sentence: "Both psychology and physics would remain of interest to him, and he often had to struggle with his loyalties to one or the other." It's reasonable to conclude from the source that Mr. Jeffress struggled with which interest he wanted to pursue, but it's not a conclusion the source gives. There were other examples, but I forgot.

As for plagiarism, I wasn't accusing you of doing anything wrong, just pointing it out. As an example, the article has this:

"It was only after he began his long association with UT's Defense Research Laboratory (DRL) in 1950 that he had assistants capable of, and interested in, doing all the menial work necessary to implement and run the experiments he said he had been thinking about all along."

which is nearly identical to this passage from the McFadden, Young & McKinney piece:

"[I]t was only after he began his long association with UT's Defense Research Lab in 1950 that he had assistants capable of, and interested in, doing all the menial work necessary to implement and run the experiments Lloyd had been thinking about all along."

There were other, similarly-improbable borrowings as well, but, like I said, you're not being called out here.

The reliability requirement is less about physical publishing and more about having an editorial process and an established reputation for accuracy. For instance, CNN's news website is considered a reliable source, despite not being printed, but many small alternate newspapers aren't, and anything published by self-publishing services like Amazon's CreateSpace is categorically unreliable. The memorial piece was issued and published by UT's faculty council, which doesn't, in itself, have an established reputation regarding its publishing accuracy. Additionally, the authors and publisher were closely connected with the subject. That makes using the memorial for favorable facts and particularly favorable assessments problematic, and having a print copy wouldn't make a difference on that score. It's possible I'm wrong about this, and, if you'd like a second opinion, feel free to ask at the reliable sources noticeboard. In the meantime, a somewhat questionable source is better than no source, and I wouldn't feel bad leaving it as is.

The article rating is not worth worrying about. Good article status is a big deal, but the sub-GA project ratings (assigned, ideally, according to the WP:ASSESS rubric) exist just so each WikiProject can calculate how its articles are coming along. I'm a fairly pedantic editor, and even I don't make a big deal of them.

All this said, I hope you don't get the impression I expect you to fix anything: I'm just offering advice about what will be done when someone has the time; Wikipedia is a collaborative work in progress, and there are no deadlines here. More than anything, I must say that you've done a truly laudable job with the article, especially for a new editor. The encyclopedia is better off for your contribution. Clearly, you are a gifted writer, and you should be very proud of yourself.

Best— Rebb  ing  08:56, 6 September 2016 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Gerald H. Jacobs


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. 1989 (talk) 03:43, 12 January 2017 (UTC)