User talk:Tran4mx

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Hello, Tran4mx, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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The lead you wrote sounds awkward. You used the phrase "Picked up rank" two sentences straight for example.

-One Slow Grand Prix — Preceding unsigned comment added by OneSlowGrandPrix (talk • contribs) 02:18, 19 February 2016 (UTC)

The lead is kind of all over the place, I think you should include something about his wife/ kids, too. -Wiki Khalifa — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wiki khalifa (talk • contribs) 02:28, 19 February 2016 (UTC)