User talk:Trees93

September 2022
Hello, I'm Tacyarg. I wanted to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions to Stéphan Crétier have been undone because they appeared to be promotional. Advertising and using Wikipedia as a "soapbox" are against Wikipedia policy and not permitted; Wikipedia articles should be written objectively, using independent sources, and from a neutral perspective. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thank you. Tacyarg (talk) 20:34, 7 September 2022 (UTC)


 * Hello, would you be able to tell me how changing factual information is considered promotional?
 * It is written on their website than they employ over 120k.
 * Over the last 20 years becomes over the last 27 years being that 1995 isn't 20 years ago.
 * They are also all over Africa and not just North Africa (according to their website).
 * Crisis24 and Sesami are all over the news with all the acquisitions they had in the last months and he is at the head of those corporations.
 * Also he became proprietor of the Roy Estate. Trees93 (talk) 21:11, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi there, the problem is information which is not directly sourced or which uses marketing jargon. See referencing for beginners about how to cite information, and WP:WORDS and WP:PUFFERY about words which imply importance without giving facts. So for instance you added that Crétier grew the company "organically". It is not clear what this word means in the context and it is not sourced, so it reads promotional. You also added a paragraph which referred to the company as "a leading best ... servicing the world's most influential people". I do not think it is possible not to read this as promotional. I hope that makes it clearer why I described your edit as promotional. Please also be aware that if you work for or represent this person or his company you should not edit the article - see WP:CoI. Best wishes, Tacyarg (talk) 20:40, 9 September 2022 (UTC)