User talk:Treesssss/sandbox

Peer Review: So far, your draft looks really good! You have the correct content length and cite several noteworthy sources. After looking at your citations, I wouldn't say that I could find any issues with the sources you found. Your spelling and grammar is also in good form. I like how the tone of your additions sounds like something I would already be reading on Wikipedia. I can't find any blatant biases within your work. Additionally, I like the idea of using specific artists who have been influential in their medium as examples, as readers who come to this page will most likely be looking for influential video artists. My suggestion is that you create separate sections for performance and video art. This can be done really easily by adding separate headings for the two. I think this edit would create a nice format for readers and make it easier to find specific information. Great work! Avam11 (talk) 19:33, 6 March 2018 (UTC)