User talk:Tregrecb/sandbox

Article Evaluation - Ray Allen

 * "featuring alongside": should be changed to "featured alongside" - Try to keep the tenses the same
 * "He would break": should be changed to "he broke"
 * Lot of grammar mistakes could be changed to make the article that much better
 * The order in which headers and topics in the article is displayed could be changed to flow better as an article, like his acting career and personal life shouldn't break his career and his career statistics apart. I believe this page would go better chronologically or if his acting career and accomplishments in his personal life is somewhat connected.