User talk:TrentonJohnson/sandbox

Peer review notes from Samantha Miller

I'm not sure the source from which the definition of personality was derived is considered "reliable" according to Wikipedia's guidelines.

It looks like you guys are going in a great direction with this! I think it's important that you go deeper than just "does personality change" and really delve into the different ways that personality might be affected - it looks like that's what you plan to do!

I would suggest that if you mention your examples within your parentheses, you either give a brief definition or link it to another page that defines it further.

It doesn't look like you have many sources picked out yet, but I assume those are coming! It looks like you're wanting to cite the textbook from class - I don't remember if the citations training said anything about textbooks, so I can't give input there. But, I would just double-check if I were you. If nothing else, the book is a great source of other references you could draw from!

Millersamanth (talk) 15:07, 26 March 2020 (UTC)