User talk:Trevguy117/sandbox

Summary: So I would say my next step for the article is to have classmates look it over and fix any problems with it, then continue work on the final article

Peer Review
Hi, Trevguy 117. The topic you chose to write an article on is interesting and caught my eye almost right away. I do agree that there is not much about how people hide on the internet and how it can affect their personality outside the internet. There is one thing I would like to point out about what you have so far. It seems you have only written about people hiding on the internet to make themselves appear perfect towards those they know in real life. I think all of that is well written but there is another strong point you could make that would support your argument. People in a lot of cases also take advantage of the anonymity of the internet such as cyberbullying and other similar instances where one can perform, do, or say malicious things without those actions being traced back towards them. People are known to create fake profiles on many sites with harmful intent in mind. Without any picture or name to tie the account to them it allows the user to say and do whatever they wish online without any of the repercussions. I would also say that your article needs sources in order for it to have any credibility. So far you have not used any sources and while that doesn't mean that what you have to say isn't valid, it doesn't give what you have written anything to really stand on. I'd suggest doing some research into human psychology. It might be difficult to find a source that directly talks about your same topic or a similar one but you could find something based on the human mind and human behavior and use that as a point that people can change based on situations and environments. You have a strong argument to make here and I'd like to see it come to it's full potential. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bbattel358 (talk • contribs) 03:57, 16 October 2018 (UTC)