User talk:TrevorAppel/sandbox

Your writing is very clear, easy-to-follow, and filled with good transitions. I also like that you're taking a very in-depth approach by highlighting more specific things such as infighting within the party. To introduce balance, you could also write about the party's accomplishments and any positive developments that have arisen as a result. The tone is neutral and the article is currently well organized. I see that material under headings is currently empty but I think it would be beneficial to include a heading with the names of major leaders and their positions so that the reader is familiar with who is directing the actions of the party. Chronologically, it might be better to put the 2017 General Election before the 2019 Party Infighting Section. As a reader, I would like to know if the Jubilee party has adopted any ideas or platforms from previous parties or if it is original.