User talk:Triestejoy/

I think you do a really good job of providing an unbiased perspective on a somewhat controversial policy. Your tone is very balanced and you are using your sources to find the different perspectives and public opinions on the amendment. I think there's only one thing that I was confused about. You mention the DSHEA but don't really explain what it stands for, what it is, etc. You talk about it in the last section but it's mentioned before that I think. I like the way you've organized the article, the different subsections are clear and easy to follow. Your sources also seem pretty reliable and you do a good job of citing them and not just relying on one or two sources. Overall I think your article is great!