User talk:Trilemma/Subpage

Proposal 1
Trilemma's original proposal:

Proposal 2
I'm being awfully bold, and am proposing a reorganisation of the Intelligent design article. I am boldly using Trilemma's subpage for this purpose, for the simple reason that this subpage exists, and that I am, in a way, continuing with the proposal made here by Trilemma. Nevertheless, this is my proposal, and if asked, I will gladly move it my personal space. -- Ec5618 14:59, 17 December 2005 (UTC)

I have made a few changes: To do: -- Ec5618 14:59, 17 December 2005 (UTC)
 * I have made each 'criticism' subsection its own section. My intent is to rewrite each section so that it covers ID from the perspective of the criticsm. For example 'Scientific peer review' is a topic on which both proponents and detractors of ID have thoughts, so both should be covered in a single section. Analogously, the section 'Portraying intelligent design as science' deals with a major component of ID, and should be treated as such. -- Ec5618
 * The table of contents looks much cleaner, I feel.
 * I am trying to reduce the size of each 'criticism' section.

I've made the same changes to the current text, so that both versions are again in line. I've also reordered the references. Moving huge sections is still possible, though. -- Ec5618 11:56, 18 December 2005 (UTC)