User talk:Trincoll2014/sandbox

Hi, good start. Maybe you want to list what was special about each edition and who the winners were, if there was a competition. See Wikipedia pages of Prishtina Jazz Festival and Dokufest for ideas. --Arianit (talk) 06:53, 26 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Sentences like "the festival was a great success and was greatly appreciated by the Kosovar audience" seem a bit like "puffery", and need some reliable, secondary sources. Organizers saying that their festival was "a great success" cannot be taken very seriously. --Λeternus (talk) 14:14, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

Hi
Good work on the overall content of the material and the information gathered. In the sections: "Promotion of local composers and pianists," as well as artists I think it would be good to add some well-known names, if there are any available.

Rinalila (talk) 23:33, 1 March 2014 (UTC)

Best,

Rina