User talk:Trippleare/sandbox

What caused the expansion to stop after WWI? Was it from a high number of volunteers? Or maybe the "Great Depression?--Can-Rep (talk) 16:41, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Great topic, you might want to try mentioning the types of attractions, schools, events held etc. http://www.ddsb.ca/school/greenbank/Pages/default.aspx http://www.durhamgen.com/greenbankcemetery.html --VnessElizHart (talk) 06:15, 15 October 2014 (UTC)

some quick comments
One of your claims you have sourced to wikipedia itself. We try to avoid these circular references. Often it's sufficient to link the wikipedia article inline and because the content on wikipedia can change at any moment we can't really use it as a "source". Otherwise statements like "...the bakery, located directly on Highway 12, has been a key attraction in the village." require a citation, since we're claiming that a bakery is the center of activity in the town. Otherwise a critical reader might view the sentence as a bit of puffery over a local business and question or remove it. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:50, 27 October 2014 (UTC)